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For the Story: If I Were Petty - Chapter One

I'd steal it back— my poem that she posted as her own. I'd name her plainly, demand a public apology— an admission of hypocrisy from the one who keeps her hands clean, grins like a simpleton, cackles like she's getting away with it, this even meaner magic. Navel-gazing Narcissus must not have realized I was never planning to stay quiet. I am nothing if not a truthful storyteller. Now here’s the frame: I wrote it as an example to model the concept of structure. She'd dumped her word jumble of a draft into my lap—again, unprompted, long past my repeated requests that she please, please stop doing that. What I wrote, for those familiar with craft, is called an after poem. Ironic, since she didn’t tell me until after it was posted— after it collected accolades, after it scratched her inexhaustible itch for praise. She can keep the cursed thing at this stage— still even my saying that doesn't make it hers or mean she wrote it. Just that I'm giving in to the pathetic, spinning fantasy over a piece that wasn't even my best work. I get sick with pity when I think of it, when I spot her avatar, check her list— to see my work still sitting there, near the middle section of her page six— She pissed away our friendship for a few pixels distributed by strangers, and that's not even the worst of it, but I only have time and energy for one plot twist.

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Date: 6/22/2025 11:42:00 AM
Good golly miss Molly you're on a tear Jaymee. Plagiarism bites and many have experienced it here. I once found my poem Frankenstein wears bunnies slippers on another site, word for word. At first I was upset and informed the admins, who wanted proof I actually wrote it lol. Afterward I just laughed and thought that if she was gonna steal one why settle for a B movie poem? I've got a few blockbusters in my aresenal
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 6/22/2025 11:56:00 AM
That title is an interesting collection of words by itself--very stealable, Tom. Who could blame them? xD What keeps me moving forward is deep trust in myself, and knowing that nothing I've written is my best work yet. It was all the AI kerfluffle and outrage (some legit, some not) about authenticity that made me pull this trigger. They've since removed my work, so mission and message accomplished I guess?
Date: 6/22/2025 8:23:00 AM
ah plagiarism..i've had this a couple of times on here and elsewhere, so annoying..thx for stopping by and commenting on my work
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 6/22/2025 12:03:00 PM
Hey, thanks, Charlotte. It's a bummer when it happens for sure. I've found it to be relatively rare though. Or maybe most of my stuff isn't worth swiping lol. I am sorry though that you've had multiple experiences with it. You're a really good writer.

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