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For the Persecuted

I saw the road . No footprints marred its dust I took the road That nobody travelled I saw what nobody saw And came back broken , angry and raw But that is what happens when you set out for me Sometimes The road is hard and long When the borders of right Get tainted with wrong But the road has its master And so too have i So i kept on travelling Without stopping To cry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/10/2010 12:41:00 PM
this poem is great you will have to thank your brain for coming up with this one, i loved it, a truely unique take on the road less traveled, genius
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Date: 2/10/2010 3:22:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Rebekah. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/9/2010 9:45:00 PM
I think I understand what you mean. Interesting poem, well written. Thanks for sharing and welcome to the Soup. Looking forward to reading more of your poetry. Caroline.
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Date: 2/9/2010 6:30:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all ... as this delight tonight... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup...
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Date: 2/9/2010 4:07:00 PM
Very impressive write about that road that we all must choose. Keep the creative pen flowing. Welcome to soup. Sara
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