For the Love of Cake

WHAT'S THAT YA SAY, YER DIETIN'?
AINCHA HEERED ABOUT OLE JAKE?
HE THOUGHT HE MIGHT COULD GIT A GAL
BY JUS' CUTTIN' BACK ON CAKE

WELL HE KEP' A-GITTIN' THINNER
TILL WE ALL BEGUN TA FEAR
IF WE DIDN'T GIT SOME CAKE IN HIM
HE'D UP 'N' DISAPPEAR 

THEY SAY A WORD SAID TA THE WISE
HAD OUGHTA BE SUFFICIENT...
DON'T GIVE UP CAKE OR JUS' LIKE JAKE
YA'LL END UP FAT DEFICIENT!

Just another Warrenpiece
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May 25, 2016 at 12:23 PM
I do love it and I enjoyed this one. LINDA
Dickman Avatar
February 8, 2024 at 8:41 AM
Thanks, Linda. Seems we belong to a mutual admiration society!
Teagan Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 10:45 AM
:) "fat deficient" lol
Dickman Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 10:52 AM
It is a rare condition from which not many of us suffer. Thanks for your comment, Becca.
Allison Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 5:44 PM
great humour and I love the 'warrenpiece' reference at the end - very clever:-) hugs Jan xx
Dickman Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 11:34 PM
Thanks Jan. I've been using the tag-line, "Just another warrenpiece" for some time now wondering if anybody would say it out loud and get the connection. You are the first to comment on it, so I guess it isn't too subtle after-all.
Gorelick Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 5:21 PM
Good one! I enjoyed it with my daily ice cream and cake. No worries about me being fat deficient. BG
Dickman Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 5:28 PM
Good for you, Barb!
Day Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 5:16 PM
Excellent! Fun poem with a message. Love the use of hillbilly slang - creative
Dickman Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 5:30 PM
Thanks for the kind words, Jesse.
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