For the Life of Me

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2/2/2025 for That's Life: A Different Kind of Challenge Poetry Contest sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

For the life of me, what do you want? Yes, you, the Man above, what is your plan for me? I'm too blind to see. I'm too blind to see what is your plan for me. Yes, you, the Man above, what do you want for the life of me?

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/5/2025 1:40:00 PM

“He has shown you, O mortal, what is good. And what does the Lord require of you? To act justly and to love mercy and to walk humbly with your God” (Micah 6:8). Great winner on the winners' list. Way to go. Thanks for sharing, David. Congratulations. Sara K

David Crandall
Date: 3/5/2025 2:16:00 PM

Thanks Sara, sounds like a good message!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 3/2/2025 7:52:00 PM

Now that's a soliloquy, congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!

David Crandall
Date: 3/2/2025 8:46:00 PM

Thanks Thriveni!