For the Birds


Birds have always captured my imagination,
    They have such a beauty and a unique nature;
Oh, what an array of birds for my inspection,
    I write this for the birds that fly in the azure.

They have, such a beauty and a unique nature,
    White terns on the wing or pigeons in a park;
I write this for the birds; that fly in the azure,
    Tiny hummingbirds and the owl in the dark. 

White terns on the wing, or pigeons in a park,
    The eagles and hawks, the swan and the duck;
Tiny hummingbirds - and the owl in the dark,
    Dazzling fly-catchers and kingfishers that pluck.

The eagles and hawks - the swan, and the duck,
    Woodpeckers that drum a beat or a tuneful wren;
Dazzling, fly-catchers and kingfishers that pluck,
    Beauty in the wild, city; or in a green forest glen.

Woodpeckers, that drum a beat or a tuneful wren,
    Oh what an array! Of birds for my inspection;
Beauty -  in the wild, city or in a green forest glen,
    Birds have always captured, my imagination.

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October 22, 2015


Pantoum

Submitted to the contest, For The Birds, sponsor, Anthony Slausen

Sixth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 24, 2015 at 3:52 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT**
La France Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 5:43 PM
Skat, thanks for the congratulations on the wonderful ~
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November 22, 2015 at 10:56 PM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning work broken!
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November 23, 2015 at 7:41 AM
Thanks Upma for visiting and for the congrats ~
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November 22, 2015 at 4:58 PM
Broken Wings, congratulations on your fine win! Love how you paid tribute to so many of our lovely feathered friends. Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 7:42 AM
Sandra, thanks so much dear heart for visiting my poetry and for the congratulations, I do love my birds !!!
Allison Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 4:29 PM
Beautiful pantoum Broken Wings congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 7:43 AM
Jan, thanks for the beautiful and the congrats ~
Lawless Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 3:36 PM
AH!!!! the dreaded Pantoum......the last place I would have expected to find the birds roosting....congrats on the win.
La France Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 7:44 AM
John, your comment was so funny, I could not help but laugh and thanks for the congrats ~
Tor Avatar
October 23, 2015 at 8:22 AM
Very nice Broken Wings. Nice entry for the contest. Love birds.
La France Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 7:45 AM
Thanks for visiting, Michael and for the comment ~
Martin Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 10:55 PM
Very nice, Constance. Excellent imagery and expression and sensitivity.
La France Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 7:46 AM
Thomas, thank you for that "nice" comment `
Parker Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 8:57 PM
An interesting form I need to pay more attention to.A well developed poem that soars..like your birds...good luck in the contest
La France Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 7:47 AM
Frederic, thank you so much for visiting my poetry, appreciate and thanks for the "soar" ~
Aniagyei Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 5:19 PM
Oh the Birds in sky high!!! Wonderful piece, BW! You are so talented..... PS: you are mentioned in my latest post 'On PoetrySoup' take time to check it out
La France Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 7:48 AM
Wilfred, thanks so much for visiting my poetry and mentioning me in yours, appreciate ~
Lane Avatar
October 22, 2015 at 4:47 PM
How appropriate that you'd write something so well...given your name. Well done, BW! I'm not familiar with the Pantoun.. but I'll give it a shot one of the days.
La France Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 7:49 AM
Hi Lin, thanks for visiting and that lovely comment, Pantoum is not as hard as it looks, give it a whirl ~
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October 22, 2015 at 4:36 PM
Anexcellent Pantoun... which is not an easy feat!!
La France Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 7:50 AM
Terry thanks for visiting and for the "excellent" appreciate ~
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