For She, This Victory Was Gained- Sonnet Number 2

For She, This Victory Was Gained-  Sonnet number 2


You that loved her for her long, yellow hair,  
I for her grace, charm and brilliant mind.
You left her sick and without a damn care,
while I nursed her to health staying behind.

Nights that you had her wrapped in your lies,
You fooled her with your snakelike charm.
I sat alone trying to break your evil ties,
desperately fighting to defeat your harm.

That summer we battled for her sweet hand.
A contest between your evil and truth's might.
I defeated you utterly with a true moral stand,
And you the rascal fled away in the hot night.

Now we together found exactly what true love is.
Love is "we and ours", happily not,"her and his"!

Robert J. Lindley, 07-26-2015

Note: Very loosely based upon a past experience in the late 70's..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Wigley Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 12:04 AM
I was up on my feet cheering you to the bitter end, Robert. A great write, moreso for it's factual base. Great work. Regards, Viv
Manassian Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 11:02 PM
Lovely to tell real sorties in sonnet form. My favorite form. Lovely, Robert. Thank you for sharing and for your kind visits.
Dietrich Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 7:15 PM
wow, so THAT is your love story? It's a pretty big deal then! This was very interesting to me!!
La France Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 6:57 PM
Robert, Wonderful love conquered evil 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry
Holmes Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 5:45 PM
A triumphant memory Robert!...and thanks for the comment...Peter
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July 26, 2015 at 8:17 PM
The 70s were ausome as is this poem!
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