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For Raul's Contest

Love makes the world round Bound by forces unknown now Beacons driving force It is late but still for Raul! ("v")

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 3/13/2010 2:10:00 PM

Great Senryu, Doris! Thank you for sharing it. We also had rain today and a gray sky...Keep your creative pen flowing!...Gert

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/12/2010 3:54:00 PM

Great write and Raul's contests close very quickly .. save for the next one if appropriate theme... wonderful Doris.. luv your words...luv.. Linda-Marie..

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/12/2010 12:47:00 PM

Better late than never, they say. I'm glad I had the chance to read this beauty. Smiles, Dane Ann

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/12/2010 8:09:00 AM

Great write in this one...Keep the creative pen flowing...This is a winner(^^)...Mom

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/12/2010 6:50:00 AM

We can't really explain the power love gives us, Doris. I hope it wasn't too late to enter this senryu in Raul's contes; it has merit on many levels. Love, Carolyn