For Peace

Be gentle to all;
 be not a tempest bellowing.
Be instead a mild summer shower,
raining peace and love on everyone.
You cannot always know those who suffer
from injustices or from abuse
from which they can’t escape.
By doing good at all times,
you may inadvertently bring some peace
to those who thirst for joy.


Be not a tree too stubborn to grow.
Be instead a tree that is productive,
providing sustenance for those in need.
Or be a willow tree and bend,
letting go of intolerance and hate.
And be like the sun 
on a warm spring afternoon.
Shine radiantly down, 
lighting a path of peace
to all earth’s weary travelers that pass your way.

April 3, 2022
for Anoucheka Gangabissoon's 
Your Peace Message To The World Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Goldsmith Avatar
April 19, 2022 at 12:05 PM
Congratulations on your win. "For Peace" is a lovely write. Love It. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
Agustin Avatar
April 18, 2022 at 3:29 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, wisely expressed. God bless you.
Alex Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 10:01 PM
Great thoughts and advises beautifully brought out. Congratulations!
George Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 7:32 AM
Beautiful poem Andrea... ! Congratulations on your top most win !
Alex Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 6:50 AM
"letting go of intolerance and hate"- Great! Not easy. Beautiful poem.
Gangabissoon Avatar
April 17, 2022 at 4:03 AM
Congrats on your win and thanks for participating :)
Warlov Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 7:53 AM
A modern psalm, calling us to our best ~ what we ought to be ~ not so hard to see ~ a gospel of shared reliance ~ subsuming our modern science
Krutsinger Avatar
April 5, 2022 at 10:44 AM
Great advice in metaphoric verse " Be not a tree too stubborn to grow. Be instead a tree that is productive, providing sustenance for those in need."
Koplin Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 4:45 PM
You've penned a well written uplifting message!
Sands Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 3:02 PM
So nice Andrea. I love this :)
Peck Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 1:34 PM
A beautiful poem of peace, Andrea. "be a willow that bends letting go of intolerance and hate." If only we would follow your suggestions, I know there would be peace.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 12:33 PM
I know it is an exaggeration but I heard a saying that if we all cut off our tongues, there will peace on earth. Great poem. Hugs.
Leffanta Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 11:48 AM
Most people want to live in peace but argue over how . . . .Good luck in the contest! Aloha!
Hankins Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 9:48 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Andrea. I loved your nature metaphors in vivid imagery. This is a FAVE for me.
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