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For Oscar On His 7th Birthday

Take joy in all childhood affinities 
  for they are the makings of you my son.
I am a witness to boyish sallies
  and, you child, its face to always gladden.
That in some small measure you become me 
  so your beginnings shine in countless ways,
and in my image mine own eyes do see
  a candle lit that brightens all my days.
So permit me my quatrains and couplings,
  forgive my rapture and quixotic state -
mine is the lexicon of beloved things
  and yours the idioms that resonate.
Now blow your candles and cut your iced cake
and close your eyes and all your wishes make.


            Written: March 2007
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Anaya Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 9:50 AM
Congratulations on your win! Exquisitely done, eyes glued from start to finish, Keith. "forgive my rapture and quixotic state - mine is the lexicon of beloved things and yours the idioms that resonate" Damn good! ~Anaya
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