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For Now They Hide

Bark stripped from a tree blowing in the wind Airplane stripes high across the deep blue sky Clouds racing as if wanting to rescind, Any blockage of sunlight going by All in my view, walking along the street Where snow still hugs the curbs, as if to cling To the security of the concrete Until, overpowered by the change of spring The flowers are patient as we must be In these last gasps of cold, fresh, air outside Replaced by warmth and sweet plant’s fragrance To look forward to, while for now they hide Heidi Sands 3/23/19

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Date: 3/30/2019 10:42:00 AM
The transition of winter to spring, beautifully done, Heidi. Nice imagery. Feeling sorry for the last of the snow.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/30/2019 12:26:00 PM
Thank you Sandy. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 3/24/2019 1:15:00 AM
Hang in there Heidi its on the way.
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Date: 3/24/2019 5:36:00 AM
Thanks Tom. I look forward to Spring's arrival. It's going to take some time with all this snow . Have a nice day :)
Date: 3/23/2019 9:04:00 PM
I love it that you personified snow. "snow still hugs the curbs, as if to cling To the security of the concrete," and kind of made it fearful and afraid, when it is usually fearless. Nicely written, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/23/2019 9:10:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments Caren :)
Date: 3/23/2019 3:18:00 PM
We have been facing gusty winds for the last 48 hours..things will soon change as you say..spring will win the day.
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Date: 3/23/2019 5:02:00 PM
Yes, very windy. Thank you Vijay ! :)

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