For Mother

Exhausted rest from labor's prayer
Bathed in sweat of joy
Answered with angelic child
Unblemished healthy boy

Humming a dulcet lullaby
With whispers of tomorrow
Promises of undying love
Through tears of bliss and sorrow

Contentedly sleeping, motionless
Loves' warm security
Hushed first dream of naivete
Such innocent purity

Dawn opens futures' brightened door
Eyes wide and clear of cloud
As manger breaks, simplicity escapes
And wrinkles mother's brow


   an original poem by the "poemdog" Daniel Turner
                         for my mom

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/27/2016 7:57:00 AM
A lovely, bright, warm piece, Daniel, worthy of your Mother. great work, keep it up. regards, Viv
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Date: 1/27/2016 8:15:00 AM
Thank you for the warm words of kindness and encouragement, Viv.
Date: 1/26/2016 11:38:00 AM
You are a true poet my friend... phrasing, cadence and rhyming are all top notch! BRAVO. Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/26/2016 11:43:00 AM
I am honored and flattered coming from such a troubadour as yourself. Thank you for the words of encouragement.
Date: 1/26/2016 5:12:00 AM
A very sweet tribute to your mom....
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Date: 1/26/2016 5:51:00 AM
Thank you, Archana. for the kind words.
Date: 1/25/2016 9:54:00 PM
DANIEL, THANK YOU for blessing my comment with a reply. THAT WAS NICE OF YOU!!! PD**
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Date: 1/25/2016 8:18:00 PM
Hi Daniel, I hope you are feeling better. Thank you for the beautiful write. I am a mother and love everything but the pain.... A perfect 7... LINDA
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/25/2016 8:59:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. Unfortunately, that is the roughest part. All kinds of pain for years to come, reason being when they hurt you hurt too.
Date: 1/25/2016 12:57:00 PM
- A beautiful poem to your dear mother, Danile - A mother deserves everything :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/25/2016 1:42:00 PM
Yes they do! Thank you for your words of kindness and for the visit.
Date: 1/25/2016 12:46:00 PM
I lost my mother many years ago. She was the sweetest mom who ever lived. I sense the same sweetness coming from a happy child's heart that yearns for maternal protection and tenderness. Thank you Daniel for your kind comment. It's always a pleasure to hear from you.Take care of your dog, " Buddy. " Have a terrific Monday. Warmest Regards, Andrew.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/25/2016 1:40:00 PM
Thank you, Andrew your amity is much appreciated. I am honored by your visit.
Date: 1/25/2016 10:31:00 AM
just so lovely, Daniel...has a lullaby touch...the last two lines tell of a wise observation... :-)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/25/2016 10:38:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to actually read what I was saying. You are obviously very insightful and intellectual. I appreciate the kind words.
Date: 1/24/2016 7:35:00 PM
What a lovely tribute dedicated to a wonderful mother! I love it, Daniel! Bravo and a 7! Best regards. Pandita
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Date: 1/24/2016 8:38:00 PM
You're too kind. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
Date: 1/24/2016 5:15:00 PM
Wonderful tribute!!!!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/24/2016 5:32:00 PM
Thank you, Elaine.
Date: 1/24/2016 4:49:00 PM
Lovely tribute for your mum. You were born swaddled? Most are naked!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/24/2016 6:01:00 PM
Thanks for the correction. I fitsd it.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/24/2016 5:30:00 PM
just goes to show how special I was. Thanks for the flowers.
Date: 1/24/2016 4:27:00 PM
a real gem here. Wonderful poem for your mom
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/24/2016 4:34:00 PM
82 this month. Thank you for the kind words, Andrea.
Date: 1/24/2016 1:55:00 PM
Very moving poem, Daniel. Janice
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/24/2016 2:00:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment.
Date: 1/24/2016 12:22:00 PM
Beautiful poem Daniel, very well written
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/24/2016 12:36:00 PM
Thank you. Sixty years brings a lot of wrinkles.
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