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For Mo Mcgreavey: My Mother's Day Confession

I My first wife of 30 years married me Gave me gifts of children, virginity ... Not in that order ( ha ha, hee- her) II As a Christian my body obeyed The rules of marriage, I prayed I would not cheat, abuse, or hate But my mind did cheat: FORGIVE ME III I learned as much about orga@m To please my two (married) women Not that; I married two (serial monogamy) IV On mother's day, I declare: let women lead Our grandmother's may have never bled Orgasmically. Because husbands are on top Quite apart from Mo McGreaveys education On word origins: cow C*NT is not all negation With my good Hindu Ma, wonderful wives Let men know your fantasies. End Sacrifice!

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Bill Baker

Date: 5/7/2022 5:17:00 PM

Thank you for this tribute poem for Mo, Anil. Well written with much truth and from your heart. Bill Shalom shalom

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/6/2022 9:39:00 AM

Let him who is without sin, throw the first stone. No one did for only one is sinless.

Anil Deo
Date: 5/6/2022 9:52:00 AM

Great Verse, Dear Victor. Jesus aline could have stoned sinners, instead he offered grace if theyvreoentef ("Daughter, go & sin no more")

Anil Deo

Date: 5/6/2022 7:15:00 AM

I just learned from Maureen McGreavy that she was born on Mothers Day. LORD Jesus, thank you for allowing me this awkward Gift for Mo. McGreavy. my beloved Canadian Sister, and Writer.

Anil Deo

Date: 5/6/2022 6:49:00 AM

O maureen U made me cry with this honor for a poem I was scared to write. But I fell in love with your mind and all of you here on PS. anil Deo

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 5/6/2022 6:05:00 AM

The Ted talk is called The history of a “nasty” word. And you know you made me think of Lilith in your poem. History always trying to erase Herstory. xomo

Anil Deo
Date: 5/6/2022 6:50:00 AM

Thanks darling Sister, you are my saint Muse!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 5/6/2022 6:02:00 AM

You have made my day dear open brilliant heart! You did not know that I was born on Mother’s Day, to a teenage girl, who told me, just before I left my teens, that she was pro choice, because she was told to have an abortion and chose not to. She was not monogamous, divorced 3x, and died at tender age I turn this year. Your words are a warm embrace. xomo

Anil Deo
Date: 5/6/2022 6:52:00 AM

I heard some in your poems, and I have met those sanctimonious sinners in and outr of church: U are humbly better than so many of us preachers and Catholic Priests (one abuser Wnedolene escaped from 7 years ago, when her Catholic husband died). I do not stain Jesus Christ by exposing demons inside the Church, Love U and Happy Happier Mothers Day more and more Mo! AD