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(The words in quotes are Ed Sheeran song titles.) "Remember the name" you loved to repeat? "Kiss me" again on Piccadilly Street. Smell the "supermarket flowers---" lilies, roses, and such. "Take me back to London," where our "shirtsleeves" would touch. Two "hands of gold" framed with silk sunshine, clinking together our glasses of wine... "The hills of Aberfeldy" were never so green with "a perfect duet" of "the joker and the queen." Now, from our "castle on the hill," you aim each dart. Could you find a kinder "way to break my heart?" "I see fire" raging in every half-truth. Is "this" the end of us, or just "the end of youth?" "All of the stars" and "1000 nights" were witness to some incredible sights... "One" "perfect" "photograph" beside Big Ben... Now a picture torn, in need of a mend. Our still life moments have seen "happier" days. I can't "stop the rain" of "salt water" haze. "Shivers" surround me like the windy, grey sky. "Sycamore" leaves flap fast but never fly. Your coat, your lips, the blame---"put it all on me" in public view like "overpass graffiti." "Bad habits" lead to a thousand "first time(s)," "a beautiful game," and a thousand new rhymes. I see the "shape of you" in each "dusty" leaf. My eyes search the ground, drowning with grief. "Life goes on" without a yawn or a dream. The "spark" of my heart is in your "bloodstream." "Don't" "cross me" out of snapshots, in hopes to forget. The "best part of me" will change all regret. 8-23-2023

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Date: 9/4/2023 4:06:00 AM
very clever write
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Date: 8/31/2023 2:48:00 AM
What a clever composition! Masterfully done!
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Date: 8/28/2023 2:01:00 AM
This is very clever, I used to do pantoums with song titles from music artists... I see you are big Ed fan.
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Date: 8/23/2023 8:44:00 PM
I don't know all of his songs, but I did recognize a few, and you have brought them all together in a story of love, heart break, and rebirth, quite impressive!
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 8/25/2023 7:08:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle. I only know a few myself, but used Google to compile a list to work from. It took a lot of unscrambling and shifting to create a poem that makes sense.
Date: 8/22/2023 3:34:00 PM
Can't say I'm a fan but I'm guessing he'd love this. Or he'd sue you. One or the other. Skillfully writing here Juliet
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 8/25/2023 7:05:00 PM
LOL. Thanks, Tom.
Date: 8/22/2023 3:15:00 PM
you wove the song lyrics into a fabulous poem Juliet, hugs jan xx
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 8/25/2023 7:04:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. Poetic hugs.

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