For a Vacuum Cleaner
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Oh, mighty vacuum cleaner, like magic,
you gobble debris polluting my domain
that pervades carpets, surfaces, and air-
leaving behind, a spotless, pristine home.
Oh, vacuum cleaner- fancying you could
direct your sweeping power over Earth-
suck in its choking, atmospheric grime;
eliminate, cleanse- alike my tiny world.
October 5, 2020
Contest: In Praise Of The Ode
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
2. For a Vacuum Cleaner
Rules: 8 lines, 6 words per line
Copyright © Sandra Haight | Year Posted 2020
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