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Oh, mighty vacuum cleaner, like magic, you gobble debris polluting my domain that pervades carpets, surfaces, and air- leaving behind, a spotless, pristine home. Oh, vacuum cleaner- fancying you could direct your sweeping power over Earth- suck in its choking, atmospheric grime; eliminate, cleanse- alike my tiny world. October 5, 2020 Contest: In Praise Of The Ode Sponsor: Nette Onclaud 2. For a Vacuum Cleaner Rules: 8 lines, 6 words per line

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Date: 10/16/2020 6:09:00 AM
Nicely done Sandra. Would that we could. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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