Notes About The Poem

For a Vacuum Cleaner


Oh, mighty vacuum cleaner, like magic,
you gobble debris polluting my domain
that pervades carpets, surfaces, and air-
leaving behind, a spotless, pristine home.

Oh, vacuum cleaner- fancying you could
direct your sweeping power over Earth-
suck in its choking, atmospheric grime;
eliminate, cleanse- alike my tiny world.


October 5, 2020

Contest: In Praise Of The Ode
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

2. For a Vacuum Cleaner
Rules: 8 lines, 6 words per line
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October 16, 2020 at 6:09 AM
Nicely done Sandra. Would that we could. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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