For a Split Second

A scarlet sun sears the western sky with vermilion tongues of flaming fire. And sinking below the planet’s rim, Sol ignites the far fringes of Earth. Heaven burns amidst the crimson flames scorching the edge of the horizon. And like a child playing with crayons, light scribbles cerise onto the night. Shadows meld with cobalt silhouettes, beneath a vista of ebony. And a silver moon gets snagged in branches of a gnarly old oak tree. Magic supersedes reality in my imagination's playground. And as Nature hypnotizes me, time seems to pause, for a split second./center>

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Date: 5/26/2018 7:57:00 PM
Beautifully captured moment, Emile.
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Date: 5/27/2018 7:49:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/20/2016 5:37:00 AM
Emile very beautifully painted pen with excellent visions I tip my hat wishing you a blessed weekend ahead dear friend
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Date: 2/20/2016 7:56:00 AM
Thanks liam, your comments and support are appreciated. Emile.
Date: 2/20/2016 5:16:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Emile. Love the way you ended it. HEAVENLY! Elaine
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Date: 2/20/2016 7:55:00 AM
Thanks Elaine, your comments and support are appreciated. Emile.
Date: 2/20/2016 12:25:00 AM
Your luscious words drip with exquisite imagery, Emile! You are such a master at crafting the scenery! Amazing, a 7, of course!
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Date: 3/12/2016 11:14:00 AM
Please read my last poem, Thank you Emile.
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Date: 2/20/2016 7:55:00 AM
Thanks Laura, your comments and support are appreciated. Emile.
Date: 2/19/2016 11:02:00 PM
Not gone yet, my friend ... I have time at the moment :) This is brilliant, Emile. I'm really digging your super-detailed extravagant pieces, and this goes nicely as almost a sequel to go along with your poem "Day Shuts Down". Those split-second life-pauses are to be savored ... I always find myself staring (almost dumbly) into the sky, cause nature is just awesome you know? ... and I agree with Silent. No image necessary! For me I like words to paint the picture :)
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Date: 2/20/2016 7:57:00 AM
Thanks Timothy, as always your comments and support are both appreciated. Emile.
Date: 2/19/2016 5:44:00 PM
It's so awesome to catch nature as its finest even for a split second and then to capture it forever in poetry as you have done, that is also very fine!
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Date: 3/12/2016 11:14:00 AM
Please read my last poem, Thank you Emile.
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Date: 2/20/2016 7:53:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, your support is appreciated and your comments are welcome. Emile.
Date: 2/19/2016 3:56:00 PM
Stunning! Wonderful write for a magnificent sunset. Absolutely stunning. Peace my friend.
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Date: 2/20/2016 7:52:00 AM
Thanks Daniel, your support is appreciated. Emile.
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