For a Pearl

For a pearl nested in a sea shell I have roamed many beaches in life. Just for you I have collected shells and looked inside for that magic pearl. Till today that shell just evades me, perhaps sleeping under the deep sea. But one day, I promise I will bring a shell with a magic pearl in it.

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/10/2012 7:15:00 PM

The topic of forgetfullness is coming up in alot of poems including yours and mine;) HUGS Light & Love [nite nite say prayer Ma has solo in church tomorrow! :)]

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/9/2012 4:18:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest; this is a lovely one, subtly romantic :-)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/9/2012 7:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nette's contest Kash. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/9/2012 4:29:00 AM

Great work that holds a place in the winners' circle..Congrats..Sara

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/9/2012 2:48:00 AM

Nice and romantic, Kash. I enjoyed reading. Congratulations on your big win. Smiles, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2012 11:02:00 PM

YAYYYY for your super win, Kashinath. A well deserved win for you!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/8/2012 9:07:00 PM

such fluidity of thoughts and feelings, kashi..happy for your super win in my contest...congrats!..:) hugggs!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/8/2012 7:44:00 PM

Keep looking....I will be waiting for my pearl...altho' I found out in China pearl are grown by the kazillions...you could just mail me one...ha ha. Such a sweet and sensitive write. She should be smiling! Congrats...glad u put up with my silly humor, Kash. Gwendolen

Christopher Bunton

Date: 3/8/2012 7:34:00 PM

Congratulations!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/8/2012 7:09:00 PM

congrats Kash on a fantastic win for this brilliant beauty on seashells and that illusive pearl luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2012 4:02:00 PM

This is sentimental, lovely and sweet, Kashinath. What more could anyone ask?

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/6/2012 1:09:00 PM

What a beautiful poem, Kash, and I love this creative form you employed. I hope one day you do find that "magic pearl." Winning wishes for you!! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/6/2012 12:30:00 PM

awhh, thanks for supporting my contest, kashi... do you have south sea pearls there; these are special gems in our country!... wishing you success!..:) huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/6/2012 12:18:00 PM

Magic pearl......one for me? Lovely written kash. - Luck in contest! - oxox Anne-Lise