Footprints In the Snow

They followed his footprints into the snow
Not listening to what he said
He told them plainly, they couldn't go
But they followed their hearts instead

The mountains were windy and cold that year
Back in eighteen-sixty-three
When two brothers would one day disappear
In the hills of Tennessee

The food they had was almost gone
When their Father left that day
He'd hunt that morning at the break of dawn
But he told his sons to stay

They begged and pleaded, they wanted to go
Just eight and ten years old 
They cried when their Father told them no
For it was much too cold

They waited 'til their Mother had gone to bed
And snuck out the cabin door
They would follow his tracks where ever they led
She wouldn't see them anymore

They found their bodies beside a log
Next to a frozen creek
The boys got lost in the mountain fog
Gone, almost a week

They followed his footprints into the snow
Not listening to what he said
He told them plainly, they couldn't go
But they followed their hearts instead
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Taylor Avatar
September 1, 2011 at 8:19 PM
Excellent write, my friend. A sad and distressing story but very well related. Ralph
Brown Avatar
September 1, 2011 at 9:02 AM
So much emotion flowing in the poetry I am reading today and so diverse. I am happy I was able to read your wonderful poetry today Larry. Have a wonderful day and I will be back soon to read more of your writing. Love, Carol
Cooke Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 3:38 PM
a true story i presume, very sad, but portayed with an excellent write. top notch.
Muzzey Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 3:31 PM
Larry, a wonderfully written but sad write. I remember my brother and I following our father when he told us to stay but we didn't listen and we lost our beloved dog who followed us everywhere. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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