Footle .. Footle !!

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Short  rhyme  .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dietrich Avatar
June 10, 2010 at 2:29 PM
Yes, this is a footle for sure. I have noticed something, Sean, you are usually rhyming only the second syllable. Gosh, that means the possibilities are ENDLESS because so far, I have been rhyming both syllables. I think I need to get my second set ready to post!! LUv, Andrea
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July 9, 2009 at 12:13 AM
Thanks for your always witty welcome comments.Rgds Brian I see you are to vote again in October...it reminds me of schooldays when you could not leave the table until you had eaten your greens ,as they were good for you !
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June 29, 2009 at 11:12 AM
You know where your mastery stand ... I am in your shade, my friend. One love
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May 19, 2009 at 12:33 PM
Missing your creative footles Sean. I hope you will be posting more soon. They truly are day brighteners. Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Have a wonderful day! Karen
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May 9, 2009 at 4:04 AM
Remark. So smart... Rejoice! Heart sings... Great find. Short rhymes... Hail Thee. Word King... I heard. Your words... So sweet. Your treat... Much fun. Must run... Great Day. I say... Laughing!!!! Thank you Sean Kelly. You reign! Love, Dane.
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April 25, 2009 at 11:03 AM
So much truth about these short quips. I'm waiting for you to post some new ones as you have a wonderful sense of humor that brightens my day. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a wonderful weekend! Karen
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April 19, 2009 at 12:18 PM
Keep it going!!! You've got it!
Richards Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 12:39 PM
Short is sweet!! So is this treat (poem)! ~ love, Carrie (ps..thanks for the cyber-virus warning...lets hope we steer clear)!!
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March 19, 2009 at 8:23 PM
sweet time ,,no crime,, a wonderful and seet footle that shows your imagination and stylistic talent,,,Thank you for reading and leaving your words behind upon mine,,,blessings..Cecil
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March 19, 2009 at 5:11 AM
Dear Sean, Superbly Written I just finished reading YOUR Comment on Kristin's Great POEM "Don't Burn the Day" Thank-YOU for YOUR Footle response to My "Lost LOVE" Footle I shall read more of YOU as time Permits ALWAYS...HG
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March 16, 2009 at 12:17 PM
You are the footle master. Thanks for allowing me to smile with this one and for your kind comments. Have a good day! Karen
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March 6, 2009 at 11:21 AM
I agree with Donna, "Keep 'em coming." Love your gift with humor. Enjoyed your lightheated response to my poem. You are a day brightener. Now, write some more poetry for us to enjoy!!!!!! Karen
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March 1, 2009 at 2:56 AM
True words Sean, nice footle...Raul
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February 18, 2009 at 8:37 AM
Sean, I see the very essence of this footle here! Love it! Best wishes, Carolyn
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February 12, 2009 at 8:00 PM
Yes, indeed! I love these things! Keep 'em coming, Sean! Donna
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February 12, 2009 at 6:37 AM
You are a star... Rock on my footle-minded friend, love, me
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February 11, 2009 at 2:21 PM
Hey, all the good responses were taken.! Ill just say..well done. I cant wait to see what youll come up with next. BG
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February 11, 2009 at 12:46 PM
So fine, you rhyme. A man, who can. Well done! Love, Shar
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February 11, 2009 at 12:07 PM
And now......I bow! :) Sunny days.....flags raise!!! QR
Strand Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 7:41 AM
I like ! So.... into my favourites it must go.Rgds Brian & thanks for your always welcome comments
Jordan Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 7:19 AM
Hi Sean - very true words that i reckon I must agree with - God Bless, MJ
Omaidin Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 5:33 AM
prepare.....to share..... small thought....just brought Too short....Abort Gone past.....too fast few words.....absurd Déirdre
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February 11, 2009 at 4:11 AM
hi sean, thanks for your comment. i checked out some of your work and feedbacks. i guess... Sean A poet born
Ginn Avatar
February 11, 2009 at 3:42 AM
Mr. Kelly you do carry on so. Yes my dear, short and sweet you rhymed complete, smilesss Laurie
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February 11, 2009 at 3:36 AM
absolutely right!! bravo... kello... it hard to comment like you!! ~ Arany
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