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Footle Dies

Guns kill Guts spill Blood flows Man knows Gore rots Shot dots Dark skin Dice spin Who dies What lies Who lives who gives What death Last breath What fun Have gun

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 4/28/2018 11:40:00 PM

I enjoyed reading this dark footle. Creative write.

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/29/2018 1:27:00 AM

Thank you Juliet. I appreciate that. Kind wishes, Kai

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/4/2018 6:40:00 PM

Great 'Footle' message, Kai! Well done. Congrats on your win. Sandra

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/5/2018 2:57:00 AM

Thank you Sandra. 'Peace be with us'.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/3/2018 9:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Kai, great footle. Hugs Eve ~`*

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/4/2018 1:18:00 AM

Thank you Eve. Many hugs back.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/3/2018 1:43:00 PM

a deep string of footles Kai, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/3/2018 9:49:00 AM

Back with well deserved congrats, Kai.

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/4/2018 1:19:00 AM

Thank you for your congratulations Line.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/3/2018 12:40:00 AM

- Congratulations on your 8nd place in the contest, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/3/2018 3:13:00 AM

Thank you Sunshine Smile. Hugs back to you, Kai

Pashang Salehi

Date: 3/10/2018 11:32:00 AM

Nicely done....

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/11/2018 12:37:00 AM

Thank you Pashang. Guns must die...

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/9/2018 7:36:00 PM

Strong messaging, Kai. Well done.

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/10/2018 4:47:00 AM

Thank you Line. It has to be said...Many wishes, Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2018 2:49:00 PM

- A whole story of simple words ... so well done, Kai - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 3/9/2018 7:45:00 AM

Serious topic, sarcastically delivered within the brevity of a footle hit many marks for me - all sad marks. Be well ... CayCay

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 3/10/2018 4:24:00 AM

Thank you CayCay, Swords to ploughshares. Many wishes, Kai