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Footle - Fabulous Fun Footles

The "Awkward" Dancer Dancer, prancer . . . Spinner, winner . . . Stumble, jumble! Hit wall- did fall . . . Red face, disgrace! Applause - - then pause . . . I bow, somehow ! ___________________ March 19, 2017 Poetry/Footle/Fabulous Fun Footles Copyright Protected, ID 03- 885-682-19 All Rights Reserved, 2017, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Fabulous Fun Footles Sponsor, Jan Allison, Judged 03/2017 Second Place

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Date: 4/20/2017 6:32:00 PM
This is hilarious - especially like the "Hit wall / Did fall" lines. Somehow this one slipped past me, so pleased to discover it now! Congratulations on your high-placed win! Regards, John.
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Date: 4/7/2017 10:46:00 PM
P.S. Sorry, Broken Wings! I had just recently read something by Jan...but the comment was definitely for YOU.
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Date: 4/7/2017 10:42:00 PM
So smart, Your art, Ever, Clever, Love to, Read you! Seriously, I love this, Jan. And, congrats on making the "Best New Poems" list. Not a surprise!
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Date: 4/2/2017 8:23:00 PM
so cute seeing it again, and a well deserved win it was! BIG congrats, sweetie.
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Date: 4/1/2017 8:46:00 AM
Hi BW, Congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/31/2017 6:12:00 PM
A joy to read Constance its so lovely to see your fun side in this string of footles:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/27/2017 9:56:00 AM
Great set of footles, dear Constance :)
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Date: 3/24/2017 9:29:00 PM
LOVE this, Constance. So cool how you did yours on something you enjoy so much like dance! SEVEN
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Date: 3/19/2017 10:19:00 PM
Lol I got a kick out of this piece:)
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Date: 3/19/2017 6:17:00 PM
Delightful little write! Will share with my man, he was a dancer, he will totally appreciate this gem :) xomo!
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Date: 3/19/2017 4:50:00 PM
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