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Footle-Swift Beats

Crowds hiss... lost race! Horse snorts a curse! Kids scream... field clean! Swift beats for thieves! Death bound... loud sound! Red light... hang tight! Crash!!! Bang!!! Bills land!!! Entered in Donna Golden's Footle fright contest Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci

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Date: 10/15/2009 3:48:00 PM
Sounds scary to me. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 10/14/2009 4:32:00 AM
Wishing you the best in Donna's contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/13/2009 8:23:00 AM
Bewitching write, Andrew. Only sharks and alligators scare me, not the sights we see on Halloween. They're more amusing! Love, Carolyn
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