Following the Trail of An Ant

Following the trail of an ant I almost reached its nest,

a grasshopper came in between and told  to follow it,

as I turned my back, you trampled us with your high heels in my dream.




© kashinath karmakar
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By:kashinath karmakar (23rd March 2011)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 3/25/2011 8:28:00 PM
btw check soupmail ok?
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Date: 3/25/2011 8:14:00 PM
You sure got me wondering here Kashinath or should that be "I Thank Ash" -- way too cool btw-- anyhow I was wondering what you turned into, following an ant like that? Weird dream though and youchy being stepped on! enjoyed reading this :)
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Date: 3/24/2011 12:26:00 AM
This is a dream you had, Kash?? Gosh, you must have turned into an ant to be trampled like that in the dream. Hmmm, I wonder what Dr. Freud would say about this one! (and I will try to remember the ratings, my friend!)
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Date: 3/23/2011 12:31:00 PM
Beautiful metaphrical poem perfectly narrated, Kashinath. High heels????
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Date: 3/23/2011 9:51:00 AM
What an incredible dream you had, Kashinath. There must be some "deep meaning" behind this dream. Very interesting poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/23/2011 8:23:00 AM
unorthodox piece for the theme, kashi... grreeat stuff! :) huggs
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Date: 3/23/2011 8:19:00 AM
Good one...Enjoyed the humor..Sara
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Date: 3/23/2011 8:10:00 AM
Imaginative and unique Kashinath .. good luck in the contest.. imagine those high heels are a pretty awesome sight for a little ant luv.. thanixx for your sweet comments today.. making u a favorite poet of mine right now..luv..
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Date: 3/23/2011 7:49:00 AM
.....And I woke up.....
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