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Followers

Follow the leader into the unknown, Proving just how little we’ve grown! Never to be more than pawns, Nothing more than thoughtless spawn! And they wonder why our minds are blown! ~6th Place in the "Follower or Leader" Contest by Carolyn Devonshire~

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2010 9:29:00 PM

Congratulations, Tirzah! Love seeing you in all these contests. Andrea

James Fraser

Date: 7/1/2010 12:08:00 PM

Wonderful Limerick Tirzah, many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's fine contest >> James

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/30/2010 10:41:00 PM

Congratulations on a great limerick. Love, joyce

John Freeman

Date: 6/30/2010 8:18:00 PM

Tirzan, Congratulations on your 6th place, Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/30/2010 7:41:00 PM

Congrats on the win

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/30/2010 1:43:00 PM

sigh......yes how few even try to have a mind of their own? Congrad's on your thoughtful win!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/30/2010 9:20:00 AM

Congratulations Tirzah on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Follower or Leader". What a hoot. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/30/2010 8:22:00 AM

Great rhyming, Tirzah, and what you sad about "thoughtless spawn" is sadly all too true. There were many awesome entries. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Katherine Stella

Date: 6/27/2010 6:04:00 AM

outstanding work only suggestion is to format it right with aa bb a so rhyme first two lines then rhyme 3-4 line then rhyme last line with first line rhyme pattern and syllable count to use would be 9 - 9 - 6 - 6 - 9 hope this helps ya cause its a great write keep on plugging away these are not always easy to do

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2010 10:00:00 PM

GOOD one, Tirzah. Good luck in the contest. Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/26/2010 6:22:00 PM

Nice write on Followers. Good luck in the contest