Follow Me

When streams of paper roses,
bleed bitter fragrances,
evil mists of leaves slowly fall,
drifting along autumnal 
breeze of yesterdays.

And i question
unseen dirt trapped
between sharpened thorns:
what if the sun,
at the end of your horizon,
seems brighter
than the skies in my mind? 
What if days are a little longer
than the spoonful of quiet nights
you’ve fought? 
Would you still paint
hollow bones of every skeleton
in your glass closet,
with black and white traces
flickering through
sociopathic holes and into
the windows of your rusted soul?

But what if, all this time,
you’ve been seeing silver linings
through ruby tinted glasses,
whilst steadying
your befogged sight with the core
of the devil’s unspoken mantras?
Maybe, the fault is in what flows
beneath your thick flesh,
that refuses to let redolent air
to rush in, 
unless wicked winds
orchestrate songs of your
delusional manifestation. 

So unlock the rails of
your iron heart,
follow me to the fields
of fluorescent fuchsias;
for I’ve always dared
to speak invisible visions
of my scarlet desires,
as I run with teal green wildflowers,
where pleasure spells my name
across lawns
in soft lavender dusks.

I fear no mourning monsters
dressed in golden feathers;
virtual vultures 
speaking in demonic dialects,
waltzing with energy vampires. 

They pretend to be angels
of cyan eden, oblivious
to the burning hell they reek,
exhaling scripted sentiments
of sanctimonious metaphors. 
Whilst rhyming with a 
cruel conscience,
seeking for meaningless endings.
They craft empty 
expressions in
ghostly recitations,
revised to ruin 
every starry sphere, 
where achromatic ink-sanity, 
remains reluctant to 
follow me and my moon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 10/31/2023 2:46:00 AM
Dear Ink Empress Good Morning. I turned to this entry at random. I loved the title which was inviting and mystical. Never did you stray and I loved how you take us on a journey from the illusion and imagery from darkness to light life and grace. This entry is absolutely gorgeous. Without any question it is one to be read out loud with emphasis and feeling. Thank you for sharing your skilled poetic talent. It was an honor turning to your page and I will return soon. Blessings (smile)
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Date: 9/25/2023 7:54:00 AM
Inky, this piece is absolutely stunning and a fave for me. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Date: 9/25/2023 12:32:00 PM
EI! I ddnt expect to win really, truly though i appreciate you liking my poem and i wrote two poems one was a romantic one but i posted the dark one instead. Thank u so very much for your kindness. Cant wait for your next contest, and i am still yet to check out your book too .
Date: 9/22/2023 4:12:00 PM
I agree with my bff Anaya. I am inspired. Thank you Inky and congratulations! :)
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/23/2023 11:25:00 AM
Thank you kind soul you are too sweet
Date: 9/21/2023 11:39:00 AM
The way you express "what if the sun, at the end of ['your horizon'] seems brighter than the skies in my mind?" it inspires me, already I have a poem in mind. "Flickering through sociopathic holes and into the windows of your rusted soul?" such depth, animosity, and the 5th stanza stunner, intensifies your thoughts. Congratulations on your win Ink Empress! Impressed like all the rest I'm moved~Anaya
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Date: 9/21/2023 2:33:00 PM
Dear kind soul thank you so much for your thoughts and well wishes you are always so kind, i keep trying to comment on your poems but it seems to not work, which is so strange, i tried few times now. I think somethings wrong with soup … sending you light always
Date: 9/21/2023 10:33:00 AM
Deep and moving poem . Congratulations on your win! "
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Date: 9/21/2023 10:51:00 AM
Thank you dear poetic soul. This poem comes from a deep place. When sometimes, some we believed were angels turn out as a disappointment… just energy vampires, ready to break you down knowing your weakness. its sad. Appreciate your well wishes
Date: 9/20/2023 8:17:00 PM
Pangs of vibrational mismatch, scorpion crawls on the ground whilst eagle soars in the sky. A powerful write, penned masterfully, as only you can, IE. Warmest congratulations on your win
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Date: 9/20/2023 9:12:00 PM
Your comment is so poetic and deep, thank you so much seeker for your warm congrats and wishes. I appreciate your support
Date: 9/16/2023 5:08:00 AM
this to me is without even a shred of doubt a very masterfully woven new creation! Definitely top class poetry! Falling well within the master of poetry class. Your descriptive powers in this are off the charts! A true gleaming gem and a fine fa or me. God bless you my friend....
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Date: 9/16/2023 9:54:00 AM
You are always so generous and kind with your thoughts and comments, i truly appreciate you saying this, as you are truly a gifted poet
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/16/2023 5:08:00 AM
And this is indeed a very, very wonderfully inspiring piece too!
Date: 9/15/2023 4:07:00 PM
Holly s@#* sorry, but each verse hit with a powerful punch and all I could do and think was; shake my head and sware, at how amazing this is and I know how much this means for you. Although I'm sure thus was a painful piece, you have executed this poem with a phantasm force and the darkness that boils in your words are herd loud, but yet beautiful and alluring. This is definitely my favourite and admire your fearless soul. Ohhhh I would love to hear this satisfying poetic piece read! Love this
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Date: 9/16/2023 1:54:00 AM
Haha you are so cute, too many unforgivable vultures, may they sleep well at night. I fear not anyone but God. Thank u for being here. U are the best
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Date: 9/15/2023 4:13:00 PM
“ I fear no mourning monsters dressed in golden feathers; virtual vultures” wow, this is of course one of my favourite lines, and how you express no nervousness to stand against these dreaded monsters. Can't please them all but heck, you still get the last word. “ They pretend to be angels of cyan eden, oblivious to the burning hell they reek” yeah, my far heart pumps precious beats with this line. And could recited every line but just one more; “ follow me and my moon“ oh yeah they do, because you are a force to be reckoned with! Looove
Date: 9/14/2023 12:55:00 PM
Now that is one truly beautifully crafted piece of poetic art
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/16/2023 1:55:00 AM
Thank u so much
Date: 9/13/2023 1:35:00 PM
Virtual vultures pretending to be angels of Eden, forming a bloc of demons and vampires, sucking the life blood from anyone or anything that stands for peace, for love, for life. Devoid of empathy or fellow feeling they feed upon the carcasses they create, the blood on their lips cannot be hid. Oh gosh, we must Collab someday inky, I've got the fever. Owooooo. I think most of us would follow you anywhere, sans moon or otherwise
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Date: 9/14/2023 6:06:00 AM
Awwn thank you im so grateful
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/14/2023 5:55:00 AM
Your style is uniquely you Inky. Don't ever change for anyone, me included. We wouldn't want you any other way.
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Date: 9/14/2023 5:35:00 AM
Kingy sorry its out of the blue my comment lolol. I meant cus u always see me writing abt vultures and as i read your comment my soul sis J aka fadingstar was msgn askn me who is tom and how refreshing your honesty is and we had a laugh about how we hide behind words and metaphors and how you were so straightfoward about that. So my response to your comment maybe influenced by that hah. I used to hide more before .n i rmmbr u telln me on insta not to so i take that as lessons. Thank u again kingy for honesty always
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/14/2023 4:59:00 AM
Hmmm... there was no critique here Inky. You told me you were going to write something like this. I just added my two cents. Vultures are everywhere
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/13/2023 11:33:00 PM
Kingy hah i guess you must be tired of me writing abt vultures. Thank you so much , i like how honest u are about my writing. Helps me improve. Glad this was good in your eyes. Was for a contest “ follow me”
Date: 9/13/2023 12:07:00 PM
Deep and penetrating, your soul... this was beautiful.
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Date: 9/13/2023 12:28:00 PM
Awwn thank you kind soul
Date: 9/13/2023 6:45:00 AM
Dear, Ink, your use of impactful diction in describing the emotions conveyed through words resonates deeply within the recesses of the mind and soul. You possess a remarkable ability to empathize, evident in the way you depict those insidious virtual predators that mercilessly steal our serenity, even when all we are trying to do is release our most agonizing emotions onto the stark, lifeless screens. Your writing is nothing short of magnificent, as always. My very best wishes for the contest
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Date: 9/13/2023 12:27:00 PM
This means so much to me sotto. Always support kindness everywhere. Grateful for your generous comment on my poem truly, thank you so much
Date: 9/13/2023 6:11:00 AM
So unlock the rails of your iron heart, follow me to the fields of fluorescent fuchsias; for I’ve always dared to speak invisible visions of my scarlet desires---powerful vocabulary throughout, Ink--emotions you convey touch depth of mind and soul. Brilliant, as always.
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Date: 9/13/2023 12:29:00 PM
Thank you Vijay so very much i always am grateful for your generous and supportive comments truly
Date: 9/13/2023 5:30:00 AM
D D D dark n D D D deep my dear, dear poetess.It's quite a powerful penning here.
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/13/2023 12:27:00 PM
Thank you so very much dear kind soul i appreciate you reading
Date: 9/13/2023 4:41:00 AM
Beautifully written, Ink! Excellent write! Charlie
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Ink Empress
Date: 9/13/2023 12:26:00 PM
Thank you charlie for your generous comment
Date: 9/13/2023 2:50:00 AM
Wow, my dearest Ink, you've once again blown my mind away with your meticulous metaphors, artistic wordsmithery and powerful language. You truly are one empathetic soul and the way you've written about those virtual vultures snatching away our peace even when we are just trying to bleed our darkest emotions on the pale screens.. So as to overcome the grief. Sigh, I must admit that it was such a heavy read in terms of emotions and it made my heart very vulnerable as I read through the sentiments
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Date: 9/13/2023 3:04:00 AM
Awwn angelic star I appreciate your sincere support and yes its sad whatver happened, we cant please everyone. I wish them well. I was sad when i wrote this and upset, im ok now. Thank u for pointing out ur fave lines too
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Date: 9/13/2023 2:52:00 AM
"When streams of paper roses, bleed bitter fragrances", "exhaling scripted sentiments of sanctimonious metaphors", "where achromatic ink-sanity, remains reluctant to follow me and my moon" Ah, so many breathtaking and heartfelt lines here, impeccably done for the contest my dear, I'm loving the imagery n alliteration, wow!
Date: 9/13/2023 2:05:00 AM
- I followed you through an evil metaphorical journey ... I should have had brighter glasses ... I fear the evil powers and demons ... woww (glad it's early morning and not a dark night :))) - An excellent poem, Ink :) - hugs
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Date: 9/13/2023 2:12:00 AM
Haha thats so cute, i was in a mood. Too many virtual vultures on instagram. Guess none here . Soupers are lovely. I feel safe . Thank u so much for visiting
Date: 9/13/2023 1:38:00 AM
Follow me... on a poetic journey through trembling clouds and seas of joy, endless music played by the heart who hears more than your words, but your winds, your wills... beautiful to read. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 9/13/2023 2:11:00 AM
Awwn thank u how poetic is ur comment. Appreciate ur poetic presence
Date: 9/13/2023 1:37:00 AM
I question unseen dirt trapped between sharpened thorns … mmmmmm deeeep!!! What if the sun at the end your horizon seems brighter than the skies in my mind.?? Ooooo the depth Papi!!!! Would you still Paint hollow bones of every skeleton in you glass closet …mmmmm maybe, the fault is in what flows beneath your thick flesh … love that line … absolutely beautiful piece papi.., love how this flows soo effortlessly
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Date: 9/13/2023 2:00:00 AM
Thank u papi i finally uploaded this, i wrote two poems and went with the dark one , hopefully its ok lolol
Date: 9/13/2023 1:25:00 AM
Follow me and my moon . Wow ! Speechless . ????
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Date: 9/13/2023 2:00:00 AM
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