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Foggy Pools of Gray

Lost in deep of winter woods, swirls of fog drink me in; strokes like shadows etched by pine, snowflakes dust a gelid fringe. Stoking flame of blushing cheeks above the embers of ruby lips, imprisoned behind charcoal streaks wisps of smoke in steel-hued rings. The wafting mist of Vicar’s Pond mirrors aigrette of Northern Star swaddles a drifting silent loon like obsidian pupils drift in wet. Clothed in shimmering pale of night, tremolo of loon heaves my chest; bathed by gleam in circular pools, drowning in liquid ashen eyes.

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Date: 1/7/2018 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Marsha, beautiful write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/6/2018 3:26:00 PM
Each line is a gem. Well done, Marsha. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/6/2018 1:17:00 PM
Marsha, your brilliant imagery brings Vicar's Pond to shivering life. Beautifully expressed enchanting poetry. Congratulations for your awesome win.. Warmest wishes ~Susan
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Date: 12/29/2017 9:58:00 AM
Your words put me at Vicar's Pond. Beautiful!
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