Foggy Pools of Gray

Lost in deep of winter woods,
swirls of fog drink me in; 
strokes like shadows etched by pine, 
snowflakes dust a gelid fringe.

Stoking flame of blushing cheeks
above the embers of ruby lips, 
imprisoned behind charcoal streaks
wisps of smoke in steel-hued rings.

The wafting mist of Vicar’s Pond 
mirrors aigrette of Northern Star
swaddles a drifting silent loon 
like obsidian pupils drift in wet. 

Clothed in shimmering pale of night, 
tremolo of loon heaves my chest; 
bathed by gleam in circular pools, 
drowning in liquid ashen eyes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roper Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 10:19 AM
Congratulations on your win, Marsha, beautiful write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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January 6, 2018 at 3:26 PM
Each line is a gem. Well done, Marsha. Congrats on your win.
Ashley Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 1:17 PM
Marsha, your brilliant imagery brings Vicar's Pond to shivering life. Beautifully expressed enchanting poetry. Congratulations for your awesome win.. Warmest wishes ~Susan
Roske Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 9:58 AM
Your words put me at Vicar's Pond. Beautiful!
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