Fog Or Frost

This land in hibernation
wakens to an icy blue.
A cloudless sky still shivers 
when melting icy dew.

Crisp are winter mornings
that greet the leafless trees.
Frost covers exposed pasture …
a cold sun begins to tease.

And so it is in mid July
with hours of daylight lost.
Exposure is quite dank and cold
in winter’s fog or frost.

Morning has an eerie feeling,
when fog fills up the air.
Wet is the cloud of whiteness
which blankets everywhere. 

And yet in a morning shiver, 
their really is a minor cost.
Spring waits around the corner …
and so pass the fog or frost.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 2/12/2022 5:32:00 PM
It is funny how our temperatures and seasons differ. Our winters can be to cold Would be nice to have it not as cold as it has been. Take care. love phyl.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 2/14/2022 4:45:00 PM
Hello Phyllis ... yes, our winters are nowhere near severe as a Canadian winter. Only on rare occasions have I seen snow but we get plenty of fog and frosts. I don't think I'd survive a Canadian winter - thank you Phyllis - Lindsay
Date: 1/25/2022 8:13:00 PM
This thought that after every winter, there awaits a spring gives hope and cheer to our life. Love the poem in its entirety with the inspiring message at the end ,dear Lindsay !
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 1/29/2022 4:40:00 PM
Hello Valsa ... thank you for your fine comment indeed. Winter is the earth's resting season before bursting into colour and new life. Catch you soon Valsa - Lindsay
Date: 1/25/2022 10:37:00 AM
Our weather pattern is exactly the same as yours, 1st September when we used to go as children to the local swimming pool, it was the 1st day of Spring and the water was freezing! Yesterday our temperature went up to 39 degrees centigrade. Good to hear others have a hot Christmas and (icy winter mornings in July especially if you happen to be visiting the Karoo, a semi desert.) Johannesburg this last Winter went down to minus 7 degrees but it was an exception - great poem Lindsay. Hugs Jenn.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 1/29/2022 4:35:00 PM
Hello Jennifer ... sometimes it doesn't pay to jump in a river on a hot day in early spring. Camping in semi-desert areas can catch people by surprise. During the day it can reach 35 degrees but at night be zero. I too believe our weather to be similar Jennifer - Lindsay
Date: 1/23/2022 5:57:00 PM
I do believe that the anticipation of waiting for that wonderful spring has its merits in the end, beautifully penned poem dear Laurie, thankyou
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 1/29/2022 4:28:00 PM
Hello Vie ... I guess there is a reason for all the seasons, but at times I think winter goes too long - thank you for your compliment Vie - Lindsay
Date: 1/22/2022 5:54:00 PM
Let Spring spring forth! Dispel that fog and frost! Now! ~ Kangaroo Clyde
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 1/29/2022 4:25:00 PM
Hello Gershon ... the Northern Hemisphere and us in the Southern Hemisphere are completely opposite. While we struggle with heat and humidity, TV images of the US with thick snow and ice wish there was compromise - thanks again Gershon - Lindsay
Date: 1/21/2022 8:50:00 AM
I forget sometimes that 'down under' July is winter, for me it is summer! I am having a foggy morning myself today and this is very evocative of that feeling~
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 1/29/2022 4:19:00 PM
Hello Michelle ... so you have them too? With the stifling humidity we have been having, my brain too is foggy. Thank you Michelle - Lindsay
Date: 1/20/2022 11:30:00 PM
I remember the foggy mornings walking to school when we couldn’t see our hand in front of our face. Your imagery is exquisite in this beautiful poem Lindsay. This beauty is going into my Faves! I loved the memories it brought back to me. Blessings xxoo
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 1/29/2022 4:16:00 PM
Hello Connie ... thank you for your encouraging comment. Oh yes, those frosty and foggy mornings are never forgotten, especially by fingers and toes - thanks once again Connie - Lindsay
Date: 1/19/2022 10:10:00 AM
Last night's news showed a Canadian Mountie trudging through snow up to his horse's withers, making it a challenge to believe Spring will ever come again . . . .(but the captcha code is YAA) . . . .
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Date: 1/29/2022 4:08:00 PM
Hello Rico ... your comment is making me envious as have been having day after day of sapping humidity. There's been thunderstorms and heavy rain which is promoting higher humidity - thank you Rico - Lindsay
Date: 1/18/2022 11:10:00 PM
We got plenty of that at the moment, spring can't come quick enough. Tom
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Date: 1/29/2022 4:03:00 PM
G'day Tom ... we've had thunderstorms, heavy rain, flooding; everything we don't expect in summer as well as stifling humidity - thank you Tom - Lindsay
Date: 1/18/2022 6:32:00 PM
I feel like spring is a long ways away. February is a real beast in Saskatchewan. But we will survive. Lovely poem my friend. Have a good night.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 1/29/2022 4:00:00 PM
Hello David ... I think our winters are chilly until I see TV footage from USA and Canada. Thank you once again David - Lindsay
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