Fog In the Darkness

fog in the darkness appears covering the ground until late morning Russell Sivey

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 7/29/2012 5:56:00 PM

Just like the kind of fog we used to get in England! Great 575 meter and flow. Well done, my friend!! Keith

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/29/2012 4:27:00 PM

i can imagine a fog that stays until morning, russel..breathtaking scene, my friend... you make want to do short poems again!..:) huggs!

Don Johnson

Date: 7/29/2012 3:04:00 AM

the fog of unknowing, is the path safe still yet, bit of a breeze, we know the right bet....

Joy Wellington

Date: 7/28/2012 8:31:00 PM

Russell, I know how fearful being in a fog can be...I was a school bus driver in the early 2000 and I remember one day on a charter, coming in to |Toronto from Niagra Falls and went on the 407 highway and ran into deep fog...this was like being in the dark, I was so scared I just stop the bus as soon as I saw a space on the right. Great Haiku, visionary and imaginative. One loved. Joy Wells

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2012 6:36:00 PM

Nice one, Russell. it's lovely when it finally goes away revealing day!

David Williams

Date: 7/28/2012 3:33:00 PM

Russell now this is what I call a visionary write, very cool my friend..David

Jack Horne

Date: 7/28/2012 3:17:00 PM

lovely haiku, my friend - I could just imagine that fog