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when a thought lingers it becomes as morning breeze a bird flying home

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Silent One

Date: 1/5/2024 12:07:00 PM

Deep and profound thinking Sara and you turned it into a haiku.. nicely done..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/5/2024 4:23:00 PM

thank you, Silent One! Your words are greatly appreciated. Sara

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/5/2024 10:00:00 AM

I really like this Sara its zooming path; passing my attention span, and holding it fast.!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/5/2024 4:24:00 PM

thank you, Joe. I appreciate you stopping by and letting my words zoom past you. :-) have a great weekend, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 1/5/2024 1:41:00 AM

Iv never thought of thoughts this way but now this will stay for a long time in my mind and i guess ill think of thoughts this way, a bird flying home! Wow! How do you think of such deep things? Your way of expressing is so profound and so moving! A haiku that truly stands out for its uniqueness and picturesque nature. Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light always

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/5/2024 4:26:00 PM

Ink--I appreciate your consistent visits and mindful comments. Your words lift my creative spirit and encourage me. Thank you. May you have a wonderful weekend, hugs, Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/5/2024 12:20:00 AM

And when it lands it brings us the inspiration we sometimes need to write. Tom

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/5/2024 4:25:00 PM

true...well said, Tom.