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Flying Feathers

Eagle swooping down
Feathers floating to the earth-
Two birds become one

July 12, 2015

birddeathflyingnaturehaiku

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Eve Roper

July 16, 2015 at 5:38 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win a 7. Hugs Eve

Kp Nunez

July 16, 2015 at 3:06 PM

Beautiful haiku, Jan. Congrats! hugs

Constance La France

July 16, 2015 at 11:54 AM

Janece so beautifully penned 7 , congratulations and thanks for visiting my haiku 13

James Inman

July 16, 2015 at 11:02 AM

One of my favorites in this wonderful contest. Beautiful dichotomy between love and death.

Jan Allison

July 16, 2015 at 10:46 AM

lovely imagery many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

July 15, 2015 at 11:16 PM

Janece, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Viv Wigley

July 15, 2015 at 11:00 PM

.. and that should read 'Derby' Cathedral. I need new keyboard or new eyes, not sure which. Viv x

Viv Wigley

July 15, 2015 at 10:59 PM

Great, crashing piece of imagery, Janece. We get peregrines nesting here at Derny Cathedral- occasionally get to see one hurtle into a flock of pigeons. Quite a spectacle. Viv x

Jan Terry

July 16, 2015 at 12:46 PM

Saw a young eagle take another bird out of the air in the mountains at Big Bear Lake, CA. He landed, with his prey, in a tall tree and the other bird was devoured in no time. The scene has always stayed with me. So graphic and raw, yet so fascinating. Janece