Fly Spy

As a fly on the wall of Larry's domain I would witness first hand the cause of his pain Once I saw what I saw Larry's Mother-in-Law I'm sure that I'd never go back there again!

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/22/2011 10:33:00 AM

Congratulations Ralph on your win in Michael J. Falotico's contest "A Fly On The Wall". Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/6/2011 1:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. You earned it with this great limerick write.

Kory Calhoun

Date: 2/5/2011 8:33:00 AM

Lol! Don't ya just love Mother-in- Law's. Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Michael's contest. Best wishes, KC

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/3/2011 1:52:00 AM

haha! gosh, now you got me curious as to what you saw, Ralph-- Larry's mother-in-law I think has become an icon! Congrats on your win :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/2/2011 4:03:00 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Ralph

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/2/2011 2:44:00 PM

LOL some of those mother in laws GAH! I think perhaps a good bit of distance should be kept between wifes and mother in laws![husbands too] Light 7 Love

Larry Belt

Date: 2/1/2011 7:22:00 PM

LOL.....That's just Too Funny....Congrats my friend.....Larry

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/1/2011 5:31:00 PM

heh heh and the mil saga continues...good one Ralph...enjoyed. Congrats on you funny win

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/1/2011 3:31:00 PM

Not surprised to see this in the winners' circle, Ralph. Congratulations!! Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/1/2011 3:26:00 PM

Well I see Larry's mother-in-law hasn't smacked you off the wall yet. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/1/2011 2:50:00 PM

Congrats Ralph on your win in my contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/1/2011 2:28:00 PM

Congrats Ralph on your big win in Michael's first contest with this terrific write and entry my friend.. enjoy another sweet success with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/29/2011 3:58:00 PM

I sure hope Larry's mother-in-law has a sense of humor. I wonder if she even knows how she's portrayed on Poetry Soup. VERY funny limerick, Ralph. Hope you'll write one for the "Taxing Times" contest too. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/28/2011 2:50:00 PM

thankxx Ralph for your encouraging comment and glad u enjoyed my expression of frustration in Who Cares??? .. we will have a gloriious weekend in Hawaii watching the Pro Bowl Football game.. an early Valentine present from my hubby to me.. and warm weather too.. happy weekend with luv..

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/27/2011 3:19:00 PM

nicely done limerick, Ralph. Tis better to sneak some humor on thin ice than to have no humor at all ! My M I L would understand haha

James Tate

Date: 1/27/2011 5:51:00 AM

Oh, you are living dangerously! Reminds of mixed emotions when you see your M-I-L driving over a cliff in you new Cadillac Good limerick

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/26/2011 5:11:00 PM

Very humorous as larry, Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/26/2011 4:47:00 PM

Good one Ralph.. sure Larry will also get a kick out of this one... he writes about his MIL all the time..haha.. good luck in the contest my friend with luv..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/26/2011 4:31:00 PM

Oh dear Ralph now she has you picking on her. Cute limerick though and I wish you luck. Joyce

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/26/2011 4:02:00 PM

Good limerick. I wish you luck with it if this is a contest entry.

Robert Shreve

Date: 1/26/2011 3:54:00 PM

funny have you been back "He assures me I'd never go back there again!"