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As a fly on the wall of Larry's domain I would witness first hand the cause of his pain Once I saw what I saw Larry's Mother-in-Law I'm sure that I'd never go back there again!

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Date: 2/22/2011 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations Ralph on your win in Michael J. Falotico's contest "A Fly On The Wall". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2011 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. You earned it with this great limerick write.
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Date: 2/5/2011 8:33:00 AM
Lol! Don't ya just love Mother-in- Law's. Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Michael's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/3/2011 1:52:00 AM
haha! gosh, now you got me curious as to what you saw, Ralph-- Larry's mother-in-law I think has become an icon! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 2/2/2011 4:03:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Ralph
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Date: 2/2/2011 2:44:00 PM
LOL some of those mother in laws GAH! I think perhaps a good bit of distance should be kept between wifes and mother in laws![husbands too] Light 7 Love
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Date: 2/1/2011 7:22:00 PM
LOL.....That's just Too Funny....Congrats my friend.....Larry
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Date: 2/1/2011 5:31:00 PM
heh heh and the mil saga continues...good one Ralph...enjoyed. Congrats on you funny win
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Date: 2/1/2011 3:31:00 PM
Not surprised to see this in the winners' circle, Ralph. Congratulations!! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/1/2011 3:26:00 PM
Well I see Larry's mother-in-law hasn't smacked you off the wall yet. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/1/2011 2:50:00 PM
Congrats Ralph on your win in my contest
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Date: 2/1/2011 2:28:00 PM
Congrats Ralph on your big win in Michael's first contest with this terrific write and entry my friend.. enjoy another sweet success with luv..
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Date: 1/29/2011 3:58:00 PM
I sure hope Larry's mother-in-law has a sense of humor. I wonder if she even knows how she's portrayed on Poetry Soup. VERY funny limerick, Ralph. Hope you'll write one for the "Taxing Times" contest too. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/28/2011 2:50:00 PM
thankxx Ralph for your encouraging comment and glad u enjoyed my expression of frustration in Who Cares??? .. we will have a gloriious weekend in Hawaii watching the Pro Bowl Football game.. an early Valentine present from my hubby to me.. and warm weather too.. happy weekend with luv..
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Date: 1/27/2011 3:19:00 PM
nicely done limerick, Ralph. Tis better to sneak some humor on thin ice than to have no humor at all ! My M I L would understand haha
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Date: 1/27/2011 5:51:00 AM
Oh, you are living dangerously! Reminds of mixed emotions when you see your M-I-L driving over a cliff in you new Cadillac Good limerick
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Date: 1/26/2011 5:11:00 PM
Very humorous as larry, Ralph
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Date: 1/26/2011 4:47:00 PM
Good one Ralph.. sure Larry will also get a kick out of this one... he writes about his MIL all the time..haha.. good luck in the contest my friend with luv..
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Date: 1/26/2011 4:31:00 PM
Oh dear Ralph now she has you picking on her. Cute limerick though and I wish you luck. Joyce
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Date: 1/26/2011 4:02:00 PM
Good limerick. I wish you luck with it if this is a contest entry.
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Date: 1/26/2011 3:54:00 PM
funny have you been back "He assures me I'd never go back there again!"
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