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Fly Or Die

I sit with page in front of me not blank, as you may think. My words are on the brink of flying or dying, you see. So I’ll just sit, and stare, and blink and try to make it better, maybe change a letter, to get my feet and rhymes in sync. When I’m stuck and mind in fetter I’ll dream of flying high. Not wanting words to die, I become a phrase abetter.
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Romios Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 4:19 PM
You are sooo cool! A phrase a better. ))) I know I need a nudge to get writing. Sometimes, I think we poets are a dime a dozen.LOL. And I get exhausted trying to inspire a world that seems only to cherish entertainment, cascades of voluminous words and imagery. Know what I mean? Pangie
Fowler Avatar
October 13, 2022 at 5:39 PM
Hey Pangie - thanks! I do know what you mean. I write for myself, sometimes short and "sweet" and sometimes laden with "words" ad nauseam. Mostly, I like fun :))
Faulkner Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 4:46 PM
Hi Linda Alice, I like your description of words on the brink of flying or dying, that's how I feel too sometimes :)
Fowler Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 6:28 AM
Thank you Michelle. Sometimes I'll write a poem, read it the next day or two, then totally change it or the form LOL. Thanks for stopping by. :)
Pandit Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 12:36 PM
Creativity flows through-- sharpening your thoughts, Linda. I like the finished product.
Fowler Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 2:59 PM
Hello friend Vijay. Thank you for your thoughtful and supportive comments. Enjoy the rest of the day. Linda
Buhagiar Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 7:50 AM
You'll fly with your poetry.
Fowler Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 7:53 AM
Aww. So sweet and encouraging Victor Thank you. hugs, Linda
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