Victor Buhagiar Poet Rhyme

Fly little Dove

I felt ashamed today
I should have not spoken that way.
My love was annoyed and left.
I was surprised by all the dialogue bereft.
Worse the telephone ceased to work,
In anger, I threw down the phone with a jerk.

Saddened by my uncouth manner
Our love must remain a winner.
How to send her a message of sorrow?
I dared not wait for tomorrow.

A message I would send with haste,
No, no, not a moment to waste.
I wrote a note and stuck it to my dove.
With all the words that spelt love.

Fly, sweet white dove, fly to her home
No time to wander or to roam, 
Straight to her loving arms, fly sweet bird
Let her message of love be heard.

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Mrs. Yolanda Nicholsen December 30, 2023 at 3:10 PM Enjoyed reading your poem lovely write.

Linda Alice Fowler December 27, 2023 at 6:17 AM Such a sweet poem and creative message. So hard to take back words hastily spoken. Hope you are well dear Victor. :)

Shirley Hawkins December 18, 2023 at 6:46 PM I loved this poem, Victor. Your poetry comes from your heart and I is evident in all you write. I hope that you are as well as can be. I wish you a Merry Christmas and hope that the New Year brings you good health and happiness. Look after yourself, Old Duck

Maria Williams November 22, 2023 at 1:43 AM A sweet declaration of Love on the wings of a white dove. How could she not resist? A fave for me, dear Victor...Hugs

Kim Rodrigues November 18, 2023 at 6:42 AM Best to apologize right away…fly dove fly! Beautiful! Hugs, sweet poet! Hope you are doing well. God bless you.

Mike Gentile November 18, 2023 at 5:33 AM Beautiful Victor! How could she resist? A lovely poem with gentle, loving imagery! Happy Saturday !

Bj Legros Kelley November 18, 2023 at 12:40 AM Victor, this is beautiful. A dove of peace is a wonderful gift to have on hand <3 I love this beautiful poem!

Tania Kitchin November 17, 2023 at 7:15 PM Victor, an enchanting poem.

Mystic Rose Rose November 17, 2023 at 3:09 PM I am sure the dove reached her surely :)

Deb M November 17, 2023 at 2:34 PM Awww Victor this is such a lovely sweet poem! Cuddles….Debx

Joseph P. DiMino November 17, 2023 at 9:12 AM "No, no, not a moment to waste. I wrote a note and stuck it to my dove. With all the words that spelt love." Love that image! Well done, Victor. Fine poetry indeed!

Charles Melody Lightning Ink November 17, 2023 at 1:52 AM A sad love poem straight from the bossom if your heart. Great poem Victor. I enjoyed reading it. Charles Melody Lightning Ink November 17, 2023 at 1:53 AM

Hilda Greenhough November 16, 2023 at 7:01 PM Thank you for this gem of a poem.

Hilda Greenhough November 16, 2023 at 7:01 PM Thank you for this gem of a poem.

Valsa George November 16, 2023 at 6:40 PM Faster than emails or phone calls, perhaps the dove will pass the message to her and how electrified, she will be reading your message dripping with the honey of love :)) Lovely poem.

Bill Baker November 16, 2023 at 3:59 PM A carrier dove, how creative you are, Victor. It is best to make amends as quickly as possible. No use letting it become bigger than others can handle. Good advice and a well written poem. I enjoyed your contribution to my poems to read today. Blessings, my friend. Bill Bill Baker November 16, 2023 at 8:59 PM It was meant for you and this poem, Victor ... I just type the name I'd just replied too again by mistake. Opps! My apologies. Bill

Evelyn Judy Buehler November 16, 2023 at 12:58 PM What a romantic notion, to seek forgiveness through a dove! This thoroughly enjoyed poem is a fave. :)

Sotto Poet November 16, 2023 at 9:21 AM Victor, your exquisite verse exudes beauty, romance, and profound sentiment. I am elated to witness the felicitous culmination of this poetic masterpiece, as your prowess in crafting amorous odes remains unparalleled.

Eve Roper November 16, 2023 at 8:50 AM Awe, a sweet note of love. Apologies so important if they come from the heart. Blessings my friend

Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2023 at 8:07 AM - A dove instead of a phone...how romantic wouldn't that be...let your dove fly to your loved one... a lovely poem, Victor :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit November 16, 2023 at 5:57 AM Fly, sweet white dove, fly to her home No time to wander or to roam, Straight to her loving arms, fly sweet bird Let her message of love be heard--how sweet a message--an earnest call of love!

Ink Empress November 16, 2023 at 5:24 AM So beautiful, romantic and heartfelt how you’ve written this poem, I especially love the ending, sounds lyrical, with exquisite rhymes. Sending you light always

Jan Allison November 16, 2023 at 5:01 AM aww Victor, so glad this poem had a happy ending, you write romantic poems so well, wheras I struggle. hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick November 16, 2023 at 4:30 AM Victor, Wonderful love spelled out in this very emotive and expressive poem. Keep on writing. Sara K

Unseeking Seeker November 16, 2023 at 3:24 AM (Smiles) that’s you alright, Victor the incorrigible romantic!