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Fly Away and Soar With Me

Morning birds dance on my window happiness is what they know How to fly away from sorrow telling me, it’s time to go Though the clouds are low and graying birds know how to rise above Sun is waiting for the taking I just need a little shove Morning birds play in my fountain drinking life so fun and free They invite the world to follow fly away and soar with me So I ask myself this question stay inside or seek the sun With the birds that grace my window I know I will be as one

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/15/2022 12:51:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD!

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/16/2022 5:22:00 AM

Thanks so much Kim xxoo

Jan Allison

Date: 3/14/2022 2:25:00 PM

so beautiful and uplifting and belated congrats on POTD:-) a joy to read Mike:-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/15/2022 5:56:00 AM

Aww, Thanks Jan xxoo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/14/2022 7:39:00 AM

A beauty! I’m clinging…

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/15/2022 5:56:00 AM

Thanks Kim xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/11/2022 10:46:00 AM

Hello Mike this is a wonderful poem. Your pen really flowed on the page. Happy Friday! xxxxoooo.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/12/2022 10:04:00 AM

Hello Mike, you are very welcome. happy Saturday. xxxx-oooo.

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/11/2022 8:16:00 PM

Thanks so much Darlene, Happy Friday!!

Susan Lawrence

Date: 3/10/2022 9:42:00 PM

Beautiful Mike … I love the way your mind and heart flow with this. I especially like they invite the world to follow Fly away and soar with me . Yes of course I will soar with thee ! Congratulations on POTD! Hugs, Susan :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/11/2022 5:46:00 AM

Thank you so much Susan, I appreciate your kind words xxoo

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/10/2022 5:30:00 PM

I think you should: Soar through those low flying clouds and let the sunshine embrace your skin. Enjoy the freedom of the wind. This is beautiful in every way, and I am drifting ever so softly through your words. Congratulations Mike, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/11/2022 5:46:00 AM

I am trying for sure! Thanks so much Brandy xxoo

Bill Baker

Date: 3/10/2022 4:20:00 PM

Great uplifting poem, Mike. The rhythm was so smooth. A relaxing and encouraging read. Congratulations on your POTD. Enjoy your day, Bill p.s. I'm following your poetry now, been reading it for a while but never clicked on follow. opps!

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/11/2022 5:47:00 AM

I'm so flattered, thank you Bill !!!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/10/2022 3:15:00 PM

Beautiful. I love it. Congrats on POTD. God bless you. Love, Gina

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/10/2022 3:57:00 PM

Thanks so much Gina xxoo

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 3/10/2022 11:59:00 AM

Love your well deserved POTD! A very beautifully constructed poem with a deep message. :)Paulette

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/10/2022 1:56:00 PM

Thank you so much Paulette xxoo

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/10/2022 11:24:00 AM

Congratulations for your great POTD Mike. Happy Thursday. Enjoy :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/10/2022 1:56:00 PM

Happy Thursday Heidi, thank you xxoo

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/10/2022 10:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. Your "Fly Away And Soar With Me" is a magical write. I wish I was a bird and could fly away. Have a great/blessed day....................

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/10/2022 1:57:00 PM

Thank you Paula xxoo

Debra L Brown

Date: 3/10/2022 10:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD! Mike, Outstanding Write, enjoyed Blessings ~ Debra

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/10/2022 1:57:00 PM

Thanks so much Debra xxoo

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/10/2022 9:13:00 AM

As I said earlier, Mike, it's "exquisite writing." I'm not at all surprised that it was chosen P.O.T.D. In fact, I'm very happy, considering some of the recent ones! CONGRATULATIONS, my friend.

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/10/2022 1:56:00 PM

Thanks so much Milt !!!

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 3/10/2022 9:11:00 AM

This is such a lovely write Mike.. just enjoyed reading your words... Congratulations on your POTD honor... God bless... ~ Ani

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/10/2022 1:57:00 PM

Thanks so much Ani, Happy Thursday xxoo

John Lawless

Date: 3/10/2022 8:51:00 AM

Very nicely done Mike congrats on POTD

Constance La France

Date: 3/10/2022 8:50:00 AM

Mike, wonderful poem, I have felt like this also, and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ Constance

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/10/2022 1:58:00 PM

Thank you Constance xxoo

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/10/2022 8:44:00 AM

WoW! Mike, This is such an uplifting and positive write. I found it to be so inviting as well. It was as though I was flying and soaring high above all that tried to weigh me down. Well done. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. Enjoy the honor. Have a nice day-Alexis

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/10/2022 1:58:00 PM

Thank you Alexis, Happy Thursday xxoo

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/10/2022 8:09:00 AM

Great invitation in the title. Each verse is a beauty. Congratulations!

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/10/2022 1:59:00 PM

Thank you Christuraj !!!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/10/2022 7:42:00 AM

Mike, you moved to Florida. Florida!... the Sunshine State! What happened? You see, my friend: You can run, but you can't hide! lol... OK, OK. Jump on my back, and I'll take you for a ride. --O, almost forgot. Congrats on POTD, Ole! ~ Big Bird

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/10/2022 2:00:00 PM

Oh Big Bird, how you flatter me !!! Thanks GW!

Margarita Lillico

Date: 3/10/2022 7:08:00 AM

Smooth and soaring! Congrats! M.

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/10/2022 7:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Margarita !!

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 3/10/2022 7:07:00 AM

Bravo! Brilliant one, Mike! Congrats on POTD

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/10/2022 7:09:00 AM

Thanks so much!!!

Warren Doll

Date: 3/10/2022 6:54:00 AM

Mike wonderful poem. Congratulations on POTD! All the best~ Warren

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/10/2022 7:04:00 AM

Thanks so much Warren !!!

Valsa George

Date: 3/10/2022 5:50:00 AM

A lovely poem....Like birds fly into the direction of light and freedom from the bondage of sorrow and strife... ! Very uplifting write....Congratulations Mike on your POTD

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/10/2022 7:05:00 AM

Thank you Valsa and Happy Thursday xxoo

Joseph May

Date: 3/10/2022 5:45:00 AM

Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/10/2022 7:05:00 AM

Thanks so much Joseph!!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/10/2022 4:48:00 AM

Back with BIG congrats on POTD Mike. Enjoy your day.

Mike Gentile
Date: 3/10/2022 7:06:00 AM

Thank you Vijay !!!