Mike Gentile Poet Rhyme

Fly Away and Soar With Me

Morning birds dance on my window
                      happiness is what they know
How to fly away from sorrow
                           telling me, it’s time to go

Though the clouds are low and graying
                     birds know how to rise above
Sun is waiting for the taking
                            I just need a little shove

Morning birds play in my fountain  
                        drinking life so fun and free
They invite the world to follow
                         fly away and soar with me

So I ask myself this question 
                         stay inside or seek the sun
With the birds that grace my window  
                               I know I will be as one

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Kim Rodrigues March 15, 2022 at 12:51 PM Congratulations on POTD! Mike Gentile March 16, 2022 at 5:22 AM Thanks so much Kim xxoo

Jan Allison March 14, 2022 at 2:25 PM so beautiful and uplifting and belated congrats on POTD:-) a joy to read Mike:-) hugs Jan xx Mike Gentile March 15, 2022 at 5:56 AM Aww, Thanks Jan xxoo

Kim Rodrigues March 14, 2022 at 7:39 AM A beauty! I’m clinging… Mike Gentile March 15, 2022 at 5:56 AM Thanks Kim xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu March 11, 2022 at 10:46 AM Hello Mike this is a wonderful poem. Your pen really flowed on the page. Happy Friday! xxxxoooo. Darlene De Beaulieu March 12, 2022 at 10:04 AM Hello Mike, you are very welcome. happy Saturday. xxxx-oooo. Mike Gentile March 11, 2022 at 8:16 PM Thanks so much Darlene, Happy Friday!!

Susan Lawrence March 10, 2022 at 9:42 PM Beautiful Mike … I love the way your mind and heart flow with this. I especially like they invite the world to follow Fly away and soar with me . Yes of course I will soar with thee ! Congratulations on POTD! Hugs, Susan :) Mike Gentile March 11, 2022 at 5:46 AM Thank you so much Susan, I appreciate your kind words xxoo

Brandy Nicole March 10, 2022 at 5:30 PM I think you should: Soar through those low flying clouds and let the sunshine embrace your skin. Enjoy the freedom of the wind. This is beautiful in every way, and I am drifting ever so softly through your words. Congratulations Mike, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy Mike Gentile March 11, 2022 at 5:46 AM I am trying for sure! Thanks so much Brandy xxoo

Bill Baker March 10, 2022 at 4:20 PM Great uplifting poem, Mike. The rhythm was so smooth. A relaxing and encouraging read. Congratulations on your POTD. Enjoy your day, Bill p.s. I'm following your poetry now, been reading it for a while but never clicked on follow. opps! Mike Gentile March 11, 2022 at 5:47 AM I'm so flattered, thank you Bill !!!

Regina Mcintosh March 10, 2022 at 3:15 PM Beautiful. I love it. Congrats on POTD. God bless you. Love, Gina Mike Gentile March 10, 2022 at 3:57 PM Thanks so much Gina xxoo

Paulette Calasibetta March 10, 2022 at 11:59 AM Love your well deserved POTD! A very beautifully constructed poem with a deep message. :)Paulette Mike Gentile March 10, 2022 at 1:56 PM Thank you so much Paulette xxoo

Heidi Sands March 10, 2022 at 11:24 AM Congratulations for your great POTD Mike. Happy Thursday. Enjoy :) Mike Gentile March 10, 2022 at 1:56 PM Happy Thursday Heidi, thank you xxoo

Paula Goldsmith March 10, 2022 at 10:54 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. Your "Fly Away And Soar With Me" is a magical write. I wish I was a bird and could fly away. Have a great/blessed day.................... Mike Gentile March 10, 2022 at 1:57 PM Thank you Paula xxoo

Debra L Brown March 10, 2022 at 10:10 AM Congratulations on your POTD! Mike, Outstanding Write, enjoyed Blessings ~ Debra Mike Gentile March 10, 2022 at 1:57 PM Thanks so much Debra xxoo

L Milton Hankins March 10, 2022 at 9:13 AM As I said earlier, Mike, it's "exquisite writing." I'm not at all surprised that it was chosen P.O.T.D. In fact, I'm very happy, considering some of the recent ones! CONGRATULATIONS, my friend. Mike Gentile March 10, 2022 at 1:56 PM Thanks so much Milt !!!

Anitha Jayasankar March 10, 2022 at 9:11 AM This is such a lovely write Mike.. just enjoyed reading your words... Congratulations on your POTD honor... God bless... ~ Ani Mike Gentile March 10, 2022 at 1:57 PM Thanks so much Ani, Happy Thursday xxoo

John Lawless March 10, 2022 at 8:51 AM Very nicely done Mike congrats on POTD

Constance La France March 10, 2022 at 8:50 AM Mike, wonderful poem, I have felt like this also, and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~ Constance Mike Gentile March 10, 2022 at 1:58 PM Thank you Constance xxoo

Alexis Y. March 10, 2022 at 8:44 AM WoW! Mike, This is such an uplifting and positive write. I found it to be so inviting as well. It was as though I was flying and soaring high above all that tried to weigh me down. Well done. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. Enjoy the honor. Have a nice day-Alexis Mike Gentile March 10, 2022 at 1:58 PM Thank you Alexis, Happy Thursday xxoo

Christuraj Alex March 10, 2022 at 8:09 AM Great invitation in the title. Each verse is a beauty. Congratulations! Mike Gentile March 10, 2022 at 1:59 PM Thank you Christuraj !!!

Gershon Wolf March 10, 2022 at 7:42 AM Mike, you moved to Florida. Florida!... the Sunshine State! What happened? You see, my friend: You can run, but you can't hide! lol... OK, OK. Jump on my back, and I'll take you for a ride. --O, almost forgot. Congrats on POTD, Ole! ~ Big Bird Mike Gentile March 10, 2022 at 2:00 PM Oh Big Bird, how you flatter me !!! Thanks GW!

Margarita Lillico March 10, 2022 at 7:08 AM Smooth and soaring! Congrats! M. Mike Gentile March 10, 2022 at 7:09 AM Thank you so much Margarita !!

Unseeking Seeker March 10, 2022 at 7:07 AM Bravo! Brilliant one, Mike! Congrats on POTD Mike Gentile March 10, 2022 at 7:09 AM Thanks so much!!!

Warren Doll March 10, 2022 at 6:54 AM Mike wonderful poem. Congratulations on POTD! All the best~ Warren Mike Gentile March 10, 2022 at 7:04 AM Thanks so much Warren !!!

Valsa George March 10, 2022 at 5:50 AM A lovely poem....Like birds fly into the direction of light and freedom from the bondage of sorrow and strife... ! Very uplifting write....Congratulations Mike on your POTD Mike Gentile March 10, 2022 at 7:05 AM Thank you Valsa and Happy Thursday xxoo

Joseph May March 10, 2022 at 5:45 AM Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD Mike Gentile March 10, 2022 at 7:05 AM Thanks so much Joseph!!

Vijay Pandit March 10, 2022 at 4:48 AM Back with BIG congrats on POTD Mike. Enjoy your day. Mike Gentile March 10, 2022 at 7:06 AM Thank you Vijay !!!

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