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I St I stu I stutter My voice it f It fal It falters They think I am a nutter My v My vo My vocal Chords they flutter My mouth does t does twi does twitch My sh shoul shoulders move as if they i they itc they itch I do a small fun dance here while si while sitt while sitting in my chair And if you are my audience (that's only fair) I w I welc I don't welcome your fear, but your enthus enthusia enthusiastic applause here *** Copyright © Darren White April 27, 2017

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Date: 8/25/2018 2:15:00 PM
Back with mo love xo
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Date: 4/30/2017 2:33:00 AM
;D fantastic pen sweet Piroet! 7 & fave xomo
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Date: 4/30/2017 10:11:00 AM
Over the screen and through the hearts of your readers Piroet :)
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Darren White
Date: 4/30/2017 2:52:00 AM
Piroet piroeting over the screen, don't I? Merci ma mo!
Date: 4/28/2017 11:40:00 AM
I had a stutter as a child and can remember trying so hard to get the words out. Brilliantly penned Darren. #7
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Darren White
Date: 4/28/2017 11:47:00 AM
Yeah, it IS hard and the harder you try the more difficult it gets :) Thanks for the 7, Elizabeth!
Date: 4/27/2017 8:30:00 PM
Clapping \o/ This reads so well - a good way to bring this to attention. :)
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Darren White
Date: 4/27/2017 11:45:00 PM
I do that from time to time, for some awareness.
Date: 4/27/2017 8:17:00 PM
If they fear you, then that is their problem! Not yours! A creative and great little write, Duir!
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Darren White
Date: 4/27/2017 11:45:00 PM
Thanks Budgie, and yes indeed.
Date: 4/27/2017 5:27:00 PM
Like this piece Darren, good skills here! Little spoken about subject. Regards, Craig
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Darren White
Date: 4/27/2017 11:44:00 PM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 4/27/2017 2:35:00 PM
I like to think of it as rhythmic speaking, a staccato vocalization. :) Well written my friend, not trying to make light of stuttering, I stuttered when I was younger.
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Darren White
Date: 4/27/2017 2:38:00 PM
I like that, staccato vocalization :) From time to time stuttering is a regular nightmare, but the better I know the person I am speaking with, the less bad it is. Thanks my friend!
Date: 4/27/2017 2:35:00 PM
Bravo for 'speaking' out on this subject Darren:-) hugs Jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 4/27/2017 2:39:00 PM
yep, from time to time I bring it up :) hugs.
Date: 4/27/2017 2:22:00 PM
I had a friend who used to stutter a lot...as a kid...She was very pretty and talented...still is..and she grew up to be an international journalist...met a handsome man and have a lovely family.She still stutters at time..When She does...I know there is a greater idea than all of us passing thrpugh her mind...Thanks for reminding me of her...dear friend... And for the excellent poem..
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Darren White
Date: 4/27/2017 2:25:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comment my friend :)
Date: 4/27/2017 2:19:00 PM
(applause) you are a great person and friend...thanks for shedding some light on the subject
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Darren White
Date: 4/27/2017 2:23:00 PM
Thank YOU for the applause and for being such a wonderful friend :)

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