Fluttering

Spring
 invites
 butterflies
 to sup nectar
 from fragrant flowers
 and dance among the blooms,
 fluttering in verdant fields,
 spreading kisses along the way
 riding on the rhythm of gentle breeze
 in a gleeful dance celebrating spring
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Date: 10/24/2023 2:09:00 PM
Very good portrayal Joseph. Good work on Your placement.'
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Date: 10/24/2023 2:09:00 PM
Very good portrayal Joseph. Good work on Your placement.'
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Date: 10/9/2023 2:39:00 PM
Joseph, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance
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Date: 10/1/2023 9:23:00 PM
So glad to visit the winner list and see this again. Congrats
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Date: 9/27/2023 11:12:00 PM
Very lovely, Joseph, congratulations:) thank you for my placement in Pleiades contests:)
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Date: 9/27/2023 1:47:00 PM
you chose a lovely way to show FLUTTERING!
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Date: 9/27/2023 9:23:00 AM
A beautiful entry for the contest. This is simple and at the same time so captivating. I can see a number of butterflies fluttering around to sup on nectar!
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Date: 9/26/2023 1:56:00 AM
- "a gleeful dance", Joseph - Lovely :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 9/25/2023 2:46:00 PM
I enjoyed your Etheree, Joseph. The words just flowed together, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 9/24/2023 7:26:00 PM
I love watching as, "butterflies dance among the blooms." Spring is a beautiful season, and your words bring a smile to my heart. My best to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 9/24/2023 1:06:00 AM
Great imagery in this Etheree. So well composed/
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Date: 9/23/2023 9:07:00 PM
Wow! Joseph, You composed such a well-written “Springtime” etheree. Stellar imagery and content. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great evening and weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/23/2023 8:12:00 AM
Oh! Excellent Etheree. It flows and it is beautiful! A Fave for me :)
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Date: 9/23/2023 7:06:00 AM
A lovely poem Joseph with a light breezy or should l say fluttery feel ! Enjoyed….Debx
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Date: 9/23/2023 6:22:00 AM
Beautifully evocative of the butterflies roaming---your poem brings to fore dance of joy. Splendid images, Joseph.
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Date: 9/23/2023 3:31:00 AM
Your etheree is full of imagery Joseph.. it really described the season and how butterflies flutter and float..
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