Joseph May Poet Etheree

Fluttering

Spring
 invites
 butterflies
 to sup nectar
 from fragrant flowers
 and dance among the blooms,
 fluttering in verdant fields,
 spreading kisses along the way
 riding on the rhythm of gentle breeze
 in a gleeful dance celebrating spring

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Joe Maverick October 24, 2023 at 2:09 PM Very good portrayal Joseph. Good work on Your placement.'

Joe Maverick October 24, 2023 at 2:09 PM Very good portrayal Joseph. Good work on Your placement.'

Constance La France October 9, 2023 at 2:39 PM Joseph, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance

Andrea Dietrich October 1, 2023 at 9:23 PM So glad to visit the winner list and see this again. Congrats

Joanna Daniel September 27, 2023 at 11:12 PM Very lovely, Joseph, congratulations:) thank you for my placement in Pleiades contests:)

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2023 at 1:47 PM you chose a lovely way to show FLUTTERING!

Valsa George September 27, 2023 at 9:23 AM A beautiful entry for the contest. This is simple and at the same time so captivating. I can see a number of butterflies fluttering around to sup on nectar!

Anne-Lise Andresen September 26, 2023 at 1:56 AM - "a gleeful dance", Joseph - Lovely :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Bill Baker September 25, 2023 at 2:46 PM I enjoyed your Etheree, Joseph. The words just flowed together, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Brandy Nicole September 24, 2023 at 7:26 PM I love watching as, "butterflies dance among the blooms." Spring is a beautiful season, and your words bring a smile to my heart. My best to you, Joseph. :) Hugs, Brandy

Victor Buhagiar September 24, 2023 at 1:06 AM Great imagery in this Etheree. So well composed/

Alexis Y. September 23, 2023 at 9:07 PM Wow! Joseph, You composed such a well-written “Springtime” etheree. Stellar imagery and content. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great evening and weekend:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands September 23, 2023 at 8:12 AM Oh! Excellent Etheree. It flows and it is beautiful! A Fave for me :)

Deb M September 23, 2023 at 7:06 AM A lovely poem Joseph with a light breezy or should l say fluttery feel ! Enjoyed….Debx

Vijay Pandit September 23, 2023 at 6:22 AM Beautifully evocative of the butterflies roaming---your poem brings to fore dance of joy. Splendid images, Joseph.

Silent One September 23, 2023 at 3:31 AM Your etheree is full of imagery Joseph.. it really described the season and how butterflies flutter and float..