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Flutter My Butterfly

When I close my eyes you come crawling stirring up my soul diving in my dreams delving thru my seams Flutter my butterfly with vestigial wings let me chase after you where the catail do sing Fly over hilltops seduced by the sea slip off to the sunshine and visions of me Enter my pasture where waters run deep place your wings upon my shoulders and let yesterday's sleep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/16/2017 6:42:00 PM
hmm yes, let yesterday's sleep, that needs to be done.....Seren
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Date: 8/14/2017 3:13:00 PM
Beautiful, Tim. I love this fluttering metaphorical poem.
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Date: 8/14/2017 6:04:00 AM
This is a keeper!! The last line.. "let yesterday's sleep". I love it!
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Date: 8/14/2017 3:45:00 AM
A lovely poem Tim. I wasn't going to read any today but I'm glad I did now!
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Date: 8/13/2017 5:04:00 PM
Lovely poem Tim :) <3
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Date: 8/13/2017 2:23:00 PM
- This was a pleasure to read, Tim :) - Beautiful ... thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/13/2017 1:14:00 PM
and may your every moment flicker with winged light, tim... super write.. huggs
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Date: 8/13/2017 1:05:00 PM
Delightfully beautiful :)
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Date: 8/13/2017 1:03:00 PM
When I read poems like this I think "beautiful" but its also a contentment to read such soothing prose, well done!
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Date: 8/13/2017 12:23:00 PM
Beautiful my friend :)
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Date: 8/13/2017 12:00:00 PM
A beautiful flow these wonderful words, Tim--great work!
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Date: 8/13/2017 11:55:00 AM
I know the sea can be alluring, but not as seductive as these romantic words. You leave me sighing, Tim.
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Date: 8/13/2017 11:32:00 AM
Really beautiful.
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Date: 8/13/2017 10:28:00 AM
I love this Tim. It is so peaceful and comforting. A definite Favorite this one is :)
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