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fluffy fur kitten's purr child so smitten posted on March 10, 2018

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Date: 3/12/2018 10:43:00 AM
Perfectly expressed. This is a gem! Superb, Line! And thanks for introducing me to the 'senryu' style. Had never heard of or seen it before. Bravo! :) gw
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Date: 3/12/2018 11:26:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon. Always love your visits and comments.
Date: 3/11/2018 7:40:00 AM
What a lovely, cuddly senryu this is, Line!! Ideal for a blissful relationship! Regards // paul
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Date: 3/11/2018 10:37:00 AM
Thanks, Paul. Much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 3/11/2018 3:57:00 AM
I used to so love kittens until I realized they were so allergic to me, and this is why my eyes water and sting. I still have a cat, Shark, who lives outside and has two heated cat houses, and a heated cat bowl. Shark loves this poem, Line!
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Date: 3/11/2018 10:38:00 AM
Thanks so much, Caren. Bes audience ever, glad I passed the test. Most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 3/10/2018 11:58:00 PM
A cute one indeed Line.
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Date: 3/11/2018 10:38:00 AM
Thanks for your visit, Tom. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/10/2018 8:56:00 PM
Yepper, I've five, no, four - it just feels like five! I read this to them all, they assemble so well, you know. They all adored it and meowed for me to read it again, then they aloofly left. Cute, Line. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 3/10/2018 9:00:00 PM
LOL - just the right length for a kittie lullaby! Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, CayCay.
Date: 3/10/2018 6:34:00 PM
I love this, Line. It's so cute. Hey, on your current contest, does it need to be posted in 2017? (and never have won any contest, right?) Please can you just let me know at soupmail or at one of my poems?
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Date: 3/10/2018 6:46:00 PM
Thanks. Andrea. And yes, that's correct.
Date: 3/10/2018 5:35:00 PM
Line, this is very cute. Thanks for sharing! James
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Date: 3/10/2018 6:22:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and for leaving a comment, James.

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