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Flowing Ink of the Mind

Positioned is the brain, writing tool, paper or book until the inside technically responds, static is the look. The mind standing as the intellectual portal is an excellent feature of being mortal. Receiving sensitive signals no matter how small from the eyes the one in the inside more in activity, function and size. Then comes the needed transmission called inspiration a careful write with some processing gives fascination. Wheels of sight roll continuously to really see the revelation then emerges from the hidden sea. Navigating each thought which is fully anointed concludes on sweet words carefully appointed. Undefined is the time frame of a session forcing out ideas can put the mind under pension. Meandering sense to impress and fit into any logical rule the crafted final piece, over it is the time to mull. Thinking, writing and thinking again follows each penned stroke nowhere near baked, still wearing an old cloak. Adjustments and perfections consistently injected in each trace makes the refined piece to other minds a welcoming place.

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Date: 7/19/2017 5:56:00 PM
Hi Funom, a beautiful rendition of the writing experience. Very personal and thoughtful. Thank you for your poetic words :)
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Date: 5/17/2017 5:00:00 PM
A wonderfully written personal view of writing. Many of us can relate in our own ways to this. :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/7/2017 6:52:00 AM
Thank you so much Lenna Walker
Date: 3/6/2017 10:23:00 PM
Fabulous poem!
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/7/2017 6:52:00 AM
Thank you so much Afzal Nusker
Date: 9/13/2016 4:30:00 PM
I really love your voice as a poet. Another delightful read for me. A Fav.
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Date: 6/7/2017 6:52:00 AM
Thank you so much Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/3/2016 5:44:00 PM
Volumes and volumes could be written about the thought process behind inspiration and writing ... but you add your own creative two cents in a worthy effort. Lots of thought put into this, Funom. Keep seeking those revelations.
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/7/2017 6:52:00 AM
Thank you so much Timothy Hicks, its been a while
Date: 8/24/2016 6:16:00 PM
This is like the motion of train wheels on a track. Such beautiful flow Funom. I know others spend hours on poems while I spend minutes. I can't help that because they are butterflies I catch in a net. It shows in the end result I'm sure. I just possess a restless muse I guess.
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/7/2017 6:51:00 AM
Yeah Jean. Mine is a mixed experience. Some poems take me 3 minutes to compose, others take me 21 days to finally bring out a piece of my satisfaction. All in all, what matters is an output suitable to those who read them. Thank you very much my dear friend.
Date: 8/24/2016 10:55:00 AM
The poem is already stored inside us my friend, Funom, we just have to find the mechanics to bring it to the light of the conscious! Detailed analysis of mechanics! A seven!
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Funom Makama
Date: 6/7/2017 6:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Demtrios

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