Flowing Down the River

I am a rose, plucked and placed
into the swirling river of this life
flowing ‘tween currents and eddies
through rocks and quiet streams. 

At times, I plunge down waterfalls 
rife with tears and suffering 
at times, the waters become calm
offering rest and respite. 

I float through the streams of time
until the end, when the river runs dry
until God reaches down and lifts up
my soul, in the rapture of this life. 




Written on 5/20/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 6:16 PM
Hello Laura, I felt like I was on the journey with the rose. Have a nice evening my friend.
Leiser Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 6:41 PM
Thank you, Darlene! Glad you liked this one. :)
Gauthier Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 9:06 PM
Lovely Laura, congrats on your gold medal win.
Faulkner Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 8:27 AM
Congratulations, Laura, this is lovely-
La France Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 10:30 AM
Laura, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent write, well done ~
Leiser Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 11:07 AM
Thank you so much, Constance, for my placement in your wonderful contest! I am thrilled you liked it :)
Sands Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 7:35 AM
Congratulations Laura. Beautiful :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 2:05 AM
A lovely verse Laura, congratulations. Tom.
Gentry Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 9:30 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done.
Leiser Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 10:36 PM
Thank you, Susan! I’m surprised it did this well!
Onclaud Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 1:58 PM
i feel much joy reading this remarkable work, laura... spill ink!..huggs
Warrior Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 6:01 AM
Your pen certainly drips a winner...beautiful write Laura...love & light...^WW^
Leiser Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 11:14 AM
Thanks, WW!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 9:24 PM
Beautifully penned; good luck in the contest, Laura.
Leiser Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 11:18 PM
Thanks, Caren! I’m glad you liked this simple poem. :)
Parker Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 12:11 PM
A journey we all take...good luck in the contest...
Leiser Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Thanks, Frederic :)
Wanter Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 11:51 AM
I think this is very beautiful. You look so young in your avatar and write so lovely.
Leiser Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 1:58 PM
Thanks so much, Sunlite! Glad you liked this :)
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