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Flowing Deep, Those Ghastly Shards of Regret

Flowing Deep, Those Ghastly Shards Of Regret Flowing deep, those ghastly shards of regret and the spasms they birth in weeping soul no reprieve, caught in that sorrowful net love's joyous flag no longer had its pole. Moon was shining and sky was gleaming bright. That fateful night, I was blind, without sight. Never saw her again, I ran away bare truth is, I knew she wanted much more than a simple life, with simple man's pay with her fast asleep, I ran out the door. Moon was shining and sky was gleaming bright. That fateful night, I was blind, without sight. Putting distance in our path, out of state I heard no cries, did not see how she bled looking back, her love became bitter hate my mistake seen, I wished to be dead. Moon was shining and sky was gleaming bright. That fateful night, I was blind, without sight. Six years and a million miles I had fled where sadder path my soul walked alone yet see her well I could, in her silk bed in sweet night dreams, we talked on the phone. Moon was shining and sky was gleaming bright. That fateful night, I was blind, without sight. Courage came and I went to her hometown to beg forgiveness for my youthful fear I saw her again in her blue nightgown I ran away, my eyes still wet with tears. Moon was shining and sky was gleaming bright. That fateful night, I was blind, without sight. As moon's rays through my window hit my eyes then I realized it was a bad dream nobody could hear my bellowing cries no, we would never again be a team. Moon was shining and sky was gleaming bright. That fateful night, I was blind, without sight. 10-08-2019 Rhyme, Written for the contest, If Only We Could Turn Back The Hands Of Time, sponsor, Silent One First place awarded

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Date: 10/18/2019 6:25:00 AM
What a heartbreaking poem, so powerfully written, I can't help but feel there is a song in this. I must say I can relate to the emotion projected (so well by you) in this write, I think you defo deserve the win, well done, fantastic stuff
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Date: 10/18/2019 1:34:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
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Date: 10/17/2019 7:26:00 AM
Well done Robert congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 10/16/2019 1:58:00 PM
Wow Robert, your poem is so full of emotion drawing me in right until the end. Such sadness in every line, such regret in every word. An amazing write and so worthy or your top place in this contest. Well done Robert. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 10/15/2019 9:23:00 PM
Your lyrical lines make us read your poem with a joy of satisfaction, dear friend ... a lovely creation in fruitful response to the contest theme ... Rightly awarded the top placement ... Congratulations ...
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Date: 10/15/2019 3:53:00 PM
Terrific! Well done.
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Date: 10/15/2019 10:18:00 AM
A poignant write Robert, The hands of time only revert in those dreams of regret...Congrats on your win..
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Date: 10/15/2019 10:07:00 AM
Wonderful rhythm and flow to your exquisite rhymes, as always, Robert..congratulations for the #1 spot on the winner's list..so well deserved..a splendid write. A FAVE for me.
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Date: 10/15/2019 1:34:00 AM
So sad... Congrats on your winning entry, but love and prayers for your painful poem... Bless you, Gina
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Date: 10/14/2019 7:13:00 PM
The sadness and regret shines from every line. Congrats on your first place win. A lovely write of anguish.
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Date: 10/14/2019 3:58:00 PM
back to say congratulations on your first place win my friend...:)
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Date: 10/14/2019 12:35:00 PM
Wow , this is an amazing poem and I could feel it every step of the way! Congratulations for your well deserved Top Win :)
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Date: 10/14/2019 12:00:00 PM
i just loved how you put this together, i guess she was the one that got away.. i can definitely relate... i think many more will... you rhyme so freely, a master of the art... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 10/14/2019 10:47:00 AM
We could hear you.. see you.. read you! How couldn't we! A great rendition.. unique imagery.. expressive diction.. captivating and aching rhythm! A striking beauty that stems not just from a highly adept pen.. but also from a heart whose chambers filled with powerful and deep sentiments carved by a Life that has revealed the sweetest and harshest sides.. and for a poet of grandeur to let it flow deep.. Another gem of your Poetry, Robert! Honoured to put in my fave list.. Regards and blessings.
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Date: 10/9/2019 5:51:00 AM
Great entry my talented amigo...superbly executed as always...all the best dear friend...keep them coming...^WW^ :o)
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Robert Lindley
Date: 10/9/2019 7:13:00 AM
Thank you my friend. When I sit to compose I do so with the thought to give to others. That came to me as a youth when I read the gems of the golden classic poetry of the legendary poets.
Date: 10/8/2019 8:56:00 PM
that opening stanza wowed me and lured me into the depths of your poem...the repeat verse adds to the beauty of this piece i feel...great write for the contest! :) hugs
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Robert Lindley
Date: 10/8/2019 9:11:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I always attempt to open with a very powerful first stanza--then try to maintain that opening power throughout the new piece. I value highly your comment and your immense kindness to this old and too oft, very tired poet.

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