Flowers In the Mist

flowers in the mist moon shines down after midnight causes fog to glow Russell Sivey

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Tanya Harrington

Date: 5/30/2012 11:26:00 AM

What a scene you paint! Tanya

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/27/2012 9:56:00 PM

A superb mixing of nature's elements. I would never have tho't about a glowing fog! (Not even after the awesome fireworks tonite! hahah.) Lovely scene, Russell....and BTW...it is not easy for me at all to type a curse word in a poem. It's like covering myself in dirt...u know it wasn't me, but my drunken pen...half of it was true...Gwendolen

Jack Horne

Date: 5/27/2012 1:28:00 PM

I just love this one, Russell. Many congrats on all your wins, my friend : )

Kash Poet

Date: 5/27/2012 11:47:00 AM

Wonderful imagery here!Love this haiku Russell.Thanks for your inspiring words at my page.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 5/26/2012 8:39:00 PM

Flowers in the mist with the moon shining down. What a beautiful scene you created! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2012 5:39:00 PM

I love the flowers in the mist line, and the moon shining down on them is beautiful.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/26/2012 1:30:00 PM

Beautiful Russell !!! - Anne-Lise

Deborah Burch

Date: 5/26/2012 10:05:00 AM

ooooo, reminds me of the movie avatar!! what a gorgeous write Russell! It is so beautiful. love ya deb btw, did you know you are one of the characters in my childrens poem?