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Flowers Fill Her Universe

Beyond the valley mottled clouds and blue Invite all strangers into quiet peace. There sunlight sparkles with the morning dew. The river hears the loudly honking geese. And fragrance from spring flowers fills the air. Each anxious soul can feel his qualms release. A quiet stillness floods the valley fair. Magnolia blossoms show their shining white. A virgin giggles adding her sweet flare. While smitten by the golden sun’s daylight, She challenges desires in her mind. Beneath the yellow trees her heart takes flight. Idyllic beauty with God’s hand entwined, Resounds His message through nature’s converse. Departing there, good virtue still aligned. Delightful flowers fill her universe.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/4/2014 1:12:00 PM
I wouldn't be surprised to learn that you wrote this outside! I see God in nature everywhere. And in the stillness we find Him. A poem to be reread often. Congrats! :)
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Date: 3/4/2012 9:36:00 PM
Congrats on your lovely win! I am in love with the scene you created...a must for my faves. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/2/2012 8:11:00 PM
DANE... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 3/2/2012 11:16:00 AM
Such a charming write and an excellent use of form! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 3/2/2012 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "UPTO SIXTEEN" contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/1/2012 8:21:00 PM
congrats Dane Ann on a special first place win for this resplendent poetry so imaginative luv..
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Date: 3/1/2012 5:36:00 PM
Dane Ann, I love this form, I don't know why I don't use it more. This is a brilliant write. The more I read it, the more I like it. In fact it is added to my 'fav poems' list. Wonderful job..........Congrats on winning Brian's contest. Well deserved.................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 3/1/2012 4:02:00 PM
Congrats, Dane Ann. Beautiful. Well written, well deserved win. Enjoyed. Great job. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 3/1/2012 5:34:00 AM
Must be mother nature, loved the write.
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