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Free verse/Flowers Beneath My Feet
Copyright Protected, 05-1816-640-20-2026
All Rights, Constance La France
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Penned, April 20, 2026/ Human Written
For the International Contest, Romanticise The Pulse
Sponsor, Ink Empress, Judged 05/05/2026

Third Place

Submitted to the International Contest, Your Favorite #3
Sponsor, Seth Pina, Judged 05/29/2026

Third Place 

Flowers Beneath My Feet



            I had a sweet dream last night that we were dancing
                       and the song was beautiful and entrancing
    lovers gliding on the dance floor
                it was amazing and it was all I ever wanted
wedding guests faded away
                 for we were lost as we twirled and swayed
it seems like a thousand years ago
           around and around you twirled me
                     and we mingled in clouds of lights like birds set free
          you whispered our love was forever
              but sadly, in the book of your life  . . .  God had it written
 and your destiny could not be unwritten
        now, my heart beats as I stand all alone with sad tears
                 the sweet music still playing in my head
           the cemetery trees weeping, swaying, and moaning
                     I am trying to be brave but I am so afraid
  time stands still as I walk 'on flowers beneath my feet'
      darling, I will love you for a thousand years and more
                             I will come in summer, fall, winter and spring
                  in falling rain, howling winds, and freezing snow
                                                 I will love you forever and more
                             no time or death can erase this love . . .

Free verse/Flowers Beneath My Feet/ Human Written
Copyright Protected, 05-1816-640-20-2026
All Rights, Constance La France
Copying any part of this work is prohibited
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Marc Avatar
May 30, 2026 at 7:08 AM
Heartbreaking in its beauty, and it stayed with me after reading.
La France Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 2:51 PM
PM, thank you for the heartfelt comment, appreciate ~
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 10:21 PM
Wow Constance. Way to go with third place here . It's so profound how you go from swaying with your lover to the trees swaying in the cemetery . So sad
La France Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 2:52 PM
Andrea, thank you for the compliment on my placement and poem ~
Empress Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 3:23 AM
Ah very achingly poetic and beautiful poem this is dear constance. I really love especially the opening lines and the ending too here is so very poignant and soul hitting! Thank you for joining my contest with this! Pleasure reading. Sending you light, always. Congratulations on your placement.
La France Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 4:43 PM
Ink, thank you for the contest and my placement, appreciate, and for the compliment, lovely comment and congratulations ~
Sheehan Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 7:52 PM
Great love poem. It captures the essence. Nice rhythm and flow. Enjoyed.
La France Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 4:14 PM
Frank, thank you for the compliment, and comment ~
Hind Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 4:12 PM
very moving,
La France Avatar
April 22, 2026 at 4:17 PM
Paige, thank you for the compliment ~
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 20, 2026 at 10:34 PM
So touching and a great take on the theme, Constance.
La France Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 6:53 AM
Subimal, thank you for the compliment and encouragement, blessings ~
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