Flowering Moon

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the moon flowering it was redeemed at the house digging for onions

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 1/18/2022 5:25:00 AM

Ooo, lovely Lasaad, where would we be without the humble onion...Delice

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/18/2022 4:48:00 AM

Excellent! Took me a moment to get perspective on your haiku! Love it!

Valsa George

Date: 1/17/2022 8:22:00 PM

The spherical onions looking like moon. An appealing haiku, Lasaad ! Nice picture ....

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/17/2022 4:55:00 AM

Your photo says it all, Lasaad--cleverly done.

Judy Ball

Date: 1/17/2022 3:58:00 AM

This is a nice one Lasaad bringing back memories of the gardens my husband used to plant in our large back yard. He never seemed to get it through his head that to plant just one thing wasn't very fruitful. One year we had so many turnips I didn't know what to do with it all and my neighbors got tired me of me trying to give them to them. lol Love the pic here. God Bless, JB

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/17/2022 2:17:00 AM

You need a small field at least to harvest those onions. Well written.

Anil Deo

Date: 1/17/2022 12:42:00 AM

Just wonderful, fruitful. Live any crop grown with known hands. Thx bro.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2022 5:40:00 PM

I enjoyed coming across this one today and the nice picture with it.