Flower of Life and Rebirth

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Oh, beatific lotus flower, blossom of my pious soul
How brilliantly you ascend, sparkling in sunrise gold
Being the emissary of divinity ancient tenets behold
Invigorating spiritual vibes unwavering beliefs extol

Oh, tender touch of angels, purity of enlightened life
How mystically your petals divulge esoteric delight
Kneeling for mortal beings, submerging into the night
Yearning renewal upon cleansing unwelcome strife

Oh, sage of wisdom, imperial emblem of knowledge
How you rise again and again, edifying life and death
Heavenly spirits you elate awakening human intellect 
Illuminating senses in revelations of Buddhist texts

Oh, symbol of rebirth, essence of pure revered faith
How prayers of sacred words in your epiphany toll
Where rhythms of my heart in tenor of nirvana echo
As you grant eternal peace to mortals lost on earth
Oh, beatific lotus flower, blossom of my pious soul

January 1, 2021
Placed 5th: Lotus of my heart poetry contest
Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose
Placed 5th: Your choice (43) contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 4/14/2022 5:59:00 AM
You have extolled this flower as the beatific symbol of life and emissary of divinity ! An astounding poem , Vijay !
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Date: 1/25/2021 2:13:00 PM
Glad to see you won two contests with this one. Congrats.
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Date: 1/18/2021 11:02:00 AM
I forgot to mention, I have to fave this above all and every fave I have made so far. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/20/2021 5:47:00 AM
That is so very kind --much appreciate, Jennifer--many thanks my friend.
Date: 1/18/2021 10:55:00 AM
A symbol of rebirth, the beatific lotus flower and a New Years day - how inspirational this poem is Vijay. I hope that this coming year will bring you and the world the joy we all deserve, we have used and abused Planet Earth, and man has become greedy, but we have learnt our lesson, a sad, heartfelt lesson, now, please God let us enjoy the rebirth of a virus free world. Your poem says it all Vijay. Kudos my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/20/2021 5:46:00 AM
Always a pleasure to read your comments, Jennifer--many thanks my friend. Much appreciate, as always.
Date: 1/11/2021 9:25:00 AM
Something magical came through in this write...it's special.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/11/2021 9:36:00 AM
Thank you Arturo--much appreciate.
Date: 1/10/2021 7:33:00 PM
A true ode, Vijay--vividly descriptive personification throughout. Janice
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Date: 1/11/2021 5:58:00 AM
Thank you Janice--much appreciate.
Date: 1/8/2021 12:38:00 PM
Such a gloriously beautiful this is Vijay! I enjoyed reading very much! I wish for you a beautiful 2021 full of beautiful poetry!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/9/2021 5:56:00 AM
Thank you Mike--you are so very kind. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 1/8/2021 12:03:00 AM
My soul does relate to every inspiring single word that exudes serenity and peace.. Your flower grabs a magic attention of the sight and insight.. speaking volumes to the soul in a majestic spiritual feel! What a wonderful rendition of the power of a flower to purify.. renew and illuminate the soul! A true Beauty! Your great artistry and eloquence never cease to amaze, dear Vijay! A great pleasure to read your wonderful poetry! My deepest regards and blessings.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/9/2021 5:55:00 AM
Always a joy to read your comments. Much appreciate, Besma. Many thanks.
Date: 1/7/2021 11:35:00 PM
"essence of pure revered faith" very descriptive. Congrats my friend. Stay safe.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/9/2021 5:54:00 AM
Thank you Barbara.
Date: 1/7/2021 4:47:00 PM
Beautiful as always.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/9/2021 5:54:00 AM
Thank you Kim.
Date: 1/7/2021 6:28:00 AM
Nice poem on the lotus and the deeper meaning behind it, Vijay:)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/9/2021 5:54:00 AM
Thank you Jo--much appreciate.
Date: 1/7/2021 6:15:00 AM
Good morning Vijay, wishing you a beautiful day, full of health and inspiration. :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/9/2021 5:54:00 AM
Thank you my friend for your visit.
Date: 1/6/2021 4:43:00 AM
Wow!!! This is so beautifully penned... Great rhymes and amazing imagery...definitely a winner... thanks for sharing... I loved reading it...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/6/2021 5:12:00 AM
Much appreciate, Supraja--many thanks.
Date: 1/5/2021 10:27:00 PM
Back to read this wonderful poem again, Vijay. Hope you have a great week :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/6/2021 5:11:00 AM
Thank you Angela. Much appreciate.
Date: 1/4/2021 4:16:00 PM
Very pretty
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/5/2021 1:02:00 PM
Thank you Kim--much appreciate.
Date: 1/4/2021 2:30:00 PM
I bet you get a placement with this beauty!~ How are things going, Vijay?
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/4/2021 3:03:00 PM
All is well. Thank you Andrea for asking. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 1/4/2021 8:41:00 AM
WoW! Vijay, This is just beautiful and exquisite. Your content and signature style is top-notch. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. Happy New Year, my friend:-) Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/4/2021 9:25:00 AM
Thank you Alexis--much appreciate.
Date: 1/4/2021 7:38:00 AM
This is just beautiful :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/4/2021 9:25:00 AM
Thank you Akkina--much appreciate.
Date: 1/3/2021 9:35:00 PM
Vijay, As simple as the Lotus, yet intricate as a spun web. Wonderful write. -Richard
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/4/2021 6:11:00 AM
Thank you Richard. Just read your brilliant write and also Vienna's equally talented take on it.
Date: 1/3/2021 7:22:00 PM
Wow, Vienna will love this...Such a classic touch in this wondrous poem,,,,
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/4/2021 6:10:00 AM
Thank you Harry--much appreciate.
Date: 1/3/2021 5:12:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Vijay. Your words do present the lotus flower perfectly :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/4/2021 6:09:00 AM
Thank you Angela--much appreciate.
Date: 1/3/2021 8:10:00 AM
This is sure to top the winner's list, Vijay. Absolutely beautiful! ~ Elaine
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Date: 1/4/2021 6:09:00 AM
Much appreciate Elaine--many thanks.
Date: 1/3/2021 7:08:00 AM
This is so beautiful Vijay. Refreshing! Well written. Congratulations :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/4/2021 6:09:00 AM
Thank you Heidi--much appreciate.
Date: 1/3/2021 12:25:00 AM
This is such a thought provoking, wise write Vijayji. Specially the third stanza, I admire. Congrats on your great win.. God bless.. ~ Ani
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/3/2021 6:28:00 AM
Thank you Ani--much appreciate.
Date: 1/2/2021 6:23:00 PM
Beautiful write, Vijay and a well deserved win, congrats!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/3/2021 6:28:00 AM
Much appreciate--many thanks.
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