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Flower Fury

Cloudy day Daisy shivers As Nature's enforcer blusters and blows The persuader is no where in sight Daisy isn't happy She'd rather hide too, But that's not her destiny She straightens her stem And furls out her petals She gathers her anger And pollinates the world Wouldn't it be wonderful if all rage could be expressed so beautifully?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/23/2009 7:36:00 AM
Like the image of the persuader, sudden, violent invisible and intransient ... what is the origin? Beautiful poem from a talented writer. Love
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Date: 3/21/2009 1:42:00 PM
Wonderful, intense, thought provolking poem, yes we should try to deal with anger in a positive way, love this poem, a great mind to feel and write something like this. Judy Riley
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Date: 3/21/2009 1:22:00 PM
Thank you for allowing me to smile with this one. Nice use of personification. Karen
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