Flower Fury

Cloudy day 
Daisy shivers
As Nature's enforcer blusters and blows
The persuader is no where in sight
Daisy isn't happy
She'd rather hide too,
But that's not her destiny

She straightens her stem
And furls out her petals
She gathers her anger
And pollinates the world

Wouldn't it be wonderful if all rage could be expressed so beautifully?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shango Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 7:36 AM
Like the image of the persuader, sudden, violent invisible and intransient ... what is the origin? Beautiful poem from a talented writer. Love
Riley Avatar
March 21, 2009 at 1:42 PM
Wonderful, intense, thought provolking poem, yes we should try to deal with anger in a positive way, love this poem, a great mind to feel and write something like this. Judy Riley
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March 21, 2009 at 1:22 PM
Thank you for allowing me to smile with this one. Nice use of personification. Karen
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