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inspired this morning by Bob's poem photo herehttps://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/fifteen_chinese_lanterns_1263905

floating aimless 
      a zig-zag in
           a time of discovery...
were these surreal 
             moments mine

lost in thought
        was life a code
poetic thoughts 
           appear
 then fade
          seeing the world come and go
in pictures of the floating world 
this ode came floating

                          to unfold

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Date: 7/4/2020 6:08:00 AM
Oh I like this very much! xomo
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Brian Strand
Date: 7/4/2020 6:16:00 AM
Thanks so much Pigeon T

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