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Maestro woodpecker taps his beat to the symphony of a rising sun, casting rays on Tomoka Pond. Great white heron, the prima ballerina, strikes her pose as blue herons pirouette. An ibis takes flight with grace as a tri-colored heron waltzes, displaying multi-hued plumage. Even the nesting wood stork adds his cries to the harmonious melody, echoing through rising mist in pristine wetlands. Peace and poise reign until the predatory osprey swoops across the stage, causing other birds to scatter. Even a basking gator’s eyes rise to observe the flutter of wings. Only the great white heron remains composed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/22/2019 6:00:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Carolyn :)
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Date: 1/22/2019 2:07:00 PM
just beautiful!
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Date: 2/21/2015 7:34:00 PM
Gave me a taste of the state I call home, a contest we both have entered... good luck in the contest you have a good poem here..I see your QB from FS might be my teams QB..welcome back...
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Date: 2/21/2015 2:02:00 PM
This is very well written with good imagery and flowing pros. Your words gently take the reader into the painting and we too can share the beauty captured by a talented brush. Emile. #7
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Date: 2/21/2015 10:02:00 AM
Hi, old love. Good to hear from you. I like your Florida ballet. The great white heron must either be crazy or very fleet of foot and wing what with the gator near. Love, daver
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Date: 2/21/2015 9:32:00 AM
Welcome back Carolyn with this beautiful poem that bathes in delightful imagery. I love it! As if I'm watching part of a nature documentary; lovely wetland dance! hugs // paul
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Date: 2/21/2015 8:41:00 AM
A beautiful and serene setting Carolyn....great imagery...happy to see you....hugs Tim
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Date: 2/21/2015 6:56:00 AM
Wow, thats a view to enjoy. Such creativity and beauty in words. Am in awe. All the best in the contest Catolyn.
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