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I came to find again the fresh fountain With footprints of Conquistadores framed In mud: residue of a brick mountain From behind which white anger once had flamed. The missing fort was not all time displaced But cougars dying without an escape From your history. Wrapped in me and disgraced I saw the Caribbean full landscape Wilting in the salt of mossy lakes. I Saw men like cougars unwilling to die. I found the seasons changed into bright cold And the evening sun the only sure gold Above slithering gangrene of jagged sea I found birds strumming on the fret of glee But nowhere could I find the thing I sought Beyond the migrant men in a dream caught.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/26/2010 10:39:00 AM
Wonderful David, very mysterious for me.. the best wishes for you and all this season. Very deep by the way,, enoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 12/26/2010 10:08:00 AM
The fountain is not there but city water supply now and the oil did damage to the beaches and wildlife but there still is hope..Great reminder of this great state..Sara
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Date: 12/23/2010 6:33:00 AM
David, this is a very interesting sonnet. YOu have mixed English sonnet with Italian almost! The imagery of the "birds strumming on the fret of glee" or "evening sun the only sure gold" are so delighting to me ear! "Men like cougars unwilling to die" so powerful! Really enjoyed this one. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/22/2010 9:24:00 PM
The Fountain of Youth in St. Augustine is across the street from my elderly stepmother's home, David. I saw a movie there on how the Conquistadors enslaved native tribes to take control of the area. A thought-provoking write. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 12/22/2010 5:19:00 PM
enjoyed this David, your search is so profound. Harry
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