Florida

I came to find again the fresh fountain
With footprints of Conquistadores framed
In mud: residue of a brick mountain
From behind which white anger once had flamed.
The missing fort was not all time displaced
But cougars dying without an escape
From your history. Wrapped in me and disgraced
I saw the Caribbean full landscape
Wilting in the salt of mossy lakes. I
Saw men like cougars unwilling to die.

I found the seasons changed into bright cold
And the evening sun the only sure gold
Above slithering gangrene of jagged sea
I found birds strumming on the fret of glee
But nowhere could I find the thing I sought
Beyond the migrant men in a dream caught.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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December 26, 2010 at 10:39 AM
Wonderful David, very mysterious for me.. the best wishes for you and all this season. Very deep by the way,, enoyed,..p.d.
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December 26, 2010 at 10:08 AM
The fountain is not there but city water supply now and the oil did damage to the beaches and wildlife but there still is hope..Great reminder of this great state..Sara
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December 23, 2010 at 6:33 AM
David, this is a very interesting sonnet. YOu have mixed English sonnet with Italian almost! The imagery of the "birds strumming on the fret of glee" or "evening sun the only sure gold" are so delighting to me ear! "Men like cougars unwilling to die" so powerful! Really enjoyed this one. LUv, Andrea
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December 22, 2010 at 9:24 PM
The Fountain of Youth in St. Augustine is across the street from my elderly stepmother's home, David. I saw a movie there on how the Conquistadors enslaved native tribes to take control of the area. A thought-provoking write. Best wishes, Carolyn
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December 22, 2010 at 5:19 PM
enjoyed this David, your search is so profound. Harry
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