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Florid Lines on Lavender and Lovely, Red Roses

Like lavender and lovely, red roses, they’re meant for your immaculate sweethearts and their fine, little delicate noses; not to damage the most sensitive parts or overwhelm the olfactory senses, bedaub with the finesse of the fine arts, as love’s a game of great consequences. Mates decide on the mere whiff of a scent, so smell good or lead to major offenses! Too much strong scent is wholly unpleasant; a little hint on the neck and the wrist is enough to smell attractively fragrant. So don’t offend like my face hitting your fist: if you heed these lines you will get the gist.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/13/2015 1:40:00 AM
I agree with you Ngoc the smell can be so overpowering:-) hugs jan xx
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Ngoc Nguyen
Date: 8/13/2015 4:45:00 AM
Thanks, JAN, for reading and commenting; you got the gist right! and your thoughts are much appreciated...Ngoc. :-D